Okay, plan. We need one. Do you guys want to maybe start with the escape from the lab itself this time? Like, the actual getting out of our cells sort of thing? Or would you rather start in the warehouse? I don't care either way.
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"If I win, I'm a prodigy. If I lose, then I'm mad. That's the way history is written."
Okay just putting an idea out there, but what about having one person create a character that was working with the lab, but turns traitor to the scientists? Then that person can help us adapt to the world.
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Hmm... I've only done one storybook before, and that one went dead after everyone escaped, kind of like this one. I think if we start off in the warehouse, the momentum will pick up faster, and as long as we figure out something they need to do or something that happens thatmoves it along, then I think we'll be good. That's why I'm wondering... Who should the possible military be commanded by? The U.S.? A secret agency apart from the government? Or maybe we could have the scientist-people in Seattle be the independent ones...
"You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because you're all the same."
Are you talking about Instinct? Yeah, that kinda failed. But, if we speed up the escaping process, limiting it to one or two posts each then it might be a good way to lay the foundations of the story. And I'll also make everyone swear a solemn oath on the pink elephant ( ) not to abandon it as soon as they've escaped
Also, Java would kind of be a ringleader for the escape - does anyone want to be that as well? I know that they might not have talked to each other before but maybe a couple of characters could have talked through walls or something. *strokes beard*
"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."
Lyanna would be the silent leader sort of thing. I like to think of her as a sort of leader. Just a different kind of leader, if you know what I mean.
Maybe Java and Lyanna could have talked through the walls and come up with the plan in the first place? I don't care, but I'm just tossing ideas out there.
Just another quack spoutingpsychobabble.
"If I win, I'm a prodigy. If I lose, then I'm mad. That's the way history is written."
Your character (sorraaay I can't remember his name) and Java could not like each other very much? Either that or he could look up to Java (who is 3 years older) and Java could think he was extremely annoying. Or something
"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."
Oh, I knew I needed to remember something. I'm going to Austria tomorrow until Sunday noght, so it's likely that I might not be able to post much. I will try as I've got my mum's laptop but it will be sporadic posting. And I won't be able to post tomorrow at all. So if you do start tomorrow will you just carry Java along?
And after that it's NaNo, but don't worry, I'm still gonna storybook
"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."
) not to abandon it as soon as they've escaped 
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