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Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:06 pm
foxfire says...



sure...we just need to find some event were that can happen...is jacob powered or is he hunter.
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Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:36 pm
Buggy says...



Jacob's a hunter. Maybe they could get in a 'disagreement' that ends in a fight... Right now he's at the base, but if I need to I can send him out. It shouldn't be too hard to come up with an excuse.
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Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:04 pm
foxfire says...



yeah...whats happening is that stevie and theo are probably hunting leaving my character alone. SHe will follow them and maybe bump to each other or that my character will think that you are a powered and vice versa.
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
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Mon Oct 19, 2009 9:49 pm
Buggy says...



Ok. I'll get him out to the street.
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Mon Oct 19, 2009 11:22 pm
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In_the_Moonlight says...



Hey guys

my character, Marisol, is not really that involved right now. She's looking for Jacob since he left. So while she's outside looking for him, could she come along and witness the altercation between Schera and Jacob???
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:38 am
ridersofdamar says...



hey, how can I hop in? Ive been away.
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:45 am
Moo says...



Maybe Theo could see you pass by or something.
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:34 am
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foxfire says...



SO BUGGY...i think that when my group is about to follow theo, you jump out of us and Schera got startled that he was totally wrapped by her strings. After whcih, she can control him

*after a little actions if you want

PS
can schera have her own group...this will be for a subplot to take down Hunter
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:12 pm
Buggy says...



In_the_Moonlight: I think it'd be awesome for Marisol to see what happens. It'll be interesting to see her reaction, especially if she's, ah, 'interested' in him.

foxfire: Cool beans. He's in the alley still right now, but he's hiding behind some boxes because he heard you coming (I think... you guys are headed down the alley way, right?)
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:07 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Sorry, but I'm confused. Are the Hunters good or bad?
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:20 pm
AquaMarine says...



Well, I guess you would say they're a bad organization which is dedicated to hunting down and killing those with powers. But I doubt all the Hunters are that bad deep down ;). (Pshh. I'm being picky)
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 6:44 pm
foxfire says...



the hunters as a whole organization could be bad but individually...not al of them are evil. some do it for a purpose


Buggy: can you post i buggy first for i am at school at the moment and yes we are in the alley right now.

PS
from the recent post, there's a werewolf somewhere near the alley...just to let you know.
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
  





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Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:11 pm
In_the_Moonlight says...



Okay, well I'll have Marisol walking by and spot what's happening. I think I'll wait till Schera has her post up, though.
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:14 pm
phantom of the potter says...



Okay - I am having a bit of trouble keeping the Hunter within the plotline. Let me know if you have any auggestions. I justed posted something, but I am not sure how much I like it.
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Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:48 am
phantom of the potter says...



Okay - Anyone care to explain what is going on? Why do the Hunters seem to be pitted against each other???
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