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Thu Apr 23, 2009 3:28 am
Dreamwalker says...



If you have any idea's or questions about the storyline, then please ask or tell me what it is you want to get across. Let's discuss how the politics could go, or if you all want in the end to have an ultimate king of dreams take over.

Also, if you wish to find someone to pair up with, you can say or ask of it here XD.

Ciao
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:03 am
thefireinmeisJC says...



Well.....

Who is really going to be with Vincent: Leslie or Lilly? Hmmm, I was leaning towards Lilly having Vincent even though Leslie is my character lol

We'll see how everything goes first before I chose someone for Leslie.

On the side of politics, hmmmmm......what would be awesome was that we had some kind of "Lion King" jazz going on. Like what if the King has a son that can get into Somnium Mundus? So technically he would be the rightful heir. But lets say Vincent takes over and nightmares rule, huh? But then the son comes back, kills Vincent, and Somnium Mundus is cool again.

Of course that's probably not happening and I'm just babbling now. In any case, I vote for a new King...not a democracy.

JC
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:16 am
thefireinmeisJC says...



Yeah yeah yeah I'm double posting.

Anyway, Leslie Lilly drama idea. Lilly doesn't know that Leslie changed the dream back to a nightmare so she goes and tells Vincent all of this. Vincent gets all mad and is ready to "punish Becca" or whatever. But then Leslie comes in, says she fixed it all up making Lilly jealous.

Don't worry if none of that made any sense.

JC
Gar, Leslie and Lilly are such similar names!
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:40 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Hm, do you think that at this ball that's going to happen for the king or whatever, that since Becca will go it could cause problems ^^
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:12 am
StolenHearts. says...



At the ball, humans aren't aloud yes? Sorry i was at a lost xD
Can the ball be a masquerade? Please?
I really want it to be! It'd be cool, and it'd be a way for the tainted dream creators to sneak in and reek some havoc.
Just thought it'd be a good way for everyone to be in it.
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:43 am
thefireinmeisJC says...



Well the tainted dream creators wouldn't wreck some havoc because King Vincent is hosting it, StolenHearts. However, a masquerade ball does sounds like something Vincent would do. I second that idea!

JC
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:50 am
StolenHearts. says...



oops sorry xD
Yayy!
Me likes masquerades (:
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:50 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Interesting. Oh, is Vincent still angry with Becca? I'm not sure what's going on. *shrugs* oh, well.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!

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Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:19 pm
Incognito says...



:O
I am lost in the story. Since when is Vincent angry at Becca? xD
I will post as soon as I figure out what is going on. More over I am going to talk to my dearest sister, the cunductor of this show.
Be assured. Vincent will be back soon enough.

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Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:34 pm
thefireinmeisJC says...



Oh? I'm sorry guys. I didn't mean to confuse anyone.

Here's whats happening:

Lilly created a nightmare.

Becca came along afterwards, and made the nightmare a dream.

Lilly finds out and goes and tells Vincent that Becca messed up her nightmare. (Making Vincent "mad" at Becca)

Leslie went back and made it a nightmare (again). And is now on her way to Vincent's castle.

........

Does that make sense?

JC
Leslie's dress: http://www.misquincemag.com/cm/misquincemag/images/quinceanera-dress-Q372-F-de-79947199.jpg
Leslie's mask:http://www.ssb5.net/users/30631/dsp_ma565_l.jpg
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:42 pm
Incognito says...



Understandable and I posted.
Do you wish for Vincent's clothing? xD

~Incognito

P.S. I am finding it anyways. No bother saying no. He is going to be masked too. >D
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:51 pm
Incognito says...



** Here is his ball clothing. ;)
His Mask
His Clothing.

I had to make sure he isn't going naked. ;)
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Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:21 am
StolenHearts. says...



Oohhh Jared is going to wear...
outfit
mask
Hehehe pretty slick (:
  





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Mon Apr 27, 2009 2:41 pm
thefireinmeisJC says...



wow, we picked such lovely outfits for our dear characters^^

Of course, Leslie's gown is soooooo much more beautiful than anyone elses. xD

jk jk

JC
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