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Wow this story is getting intense there are just a little things I'm confused about ~

(Wow big surprise I'm confused)

1) Tiger why was Jason and Alex glaring at each other?

2) are The.Dreamwalker and Firestalker still in?

Oh and anyone can claim Cappy. (figured I should say that, since every one else is)

Can Jason claim Cappy then.

Because Jok bascially said Alex attcked Jason....I think I got confused. Oops...

Sure Jok

Tiger~ I think he meant that the bull flung Alex and he crashed into Jason. It's okay thou I thought that at first to.

Ah. Thanks (:

~Nicole

Hey can Mikael claim April?
Also i was think that this power build up would continue until eventually BLAM but thankfuly no one would be hurt as someone would notice the odd energy discharge and have Jason move me away before.

Sure. Mikael can claim April.

Oh and what do you mean about the power build up? Could you explain a little more? (:

~Nicole

Hey sorry guys that my post was so random. I didn't know what to put, and felt like posting!

Okay here are some games Zeke might play. I'll let you people decide the two competitive two on two ones. Before I start though, I did not make these up, they all come from the Pendragon series by D.J MacHale.

Tato: This game is played with two players. These two stand on a circular structure, raised height into the air. Each player starts with a metal club, and the object is to get the other to fall off the platform. But there is more. Around the platform are small domes. The domes contain extra weapons. But they come with a risk to get them, because with each one you break, the more unstable the platform becomes.

Mountain Maze: This game is played in a large and high room. Around the room are high mini mountains. On top of the mountains are six buttons, three in one color, three in another. The object is to climb three different mountains, and hit you color button. First one to get them all win. Not that easy though. As you climb higher and higher, silver Frisbee, with sharp deadly edges, fly around, you must dodge these. Also the floor of the room moves around. Opening up holes, moving you around.

X-treme capture the flag: This game is played in a forest. Scattered around it are six flags, three one color, the other three another. The object is to find them all before your opponent does. But around it are also Tazer guns, that paralyze you, and trained animals that attack.

B-Brawl: The two people play on a ground level platform. On them they wear five spikes. Two on their arms, two on their legs and one on the top of their head. They both wield a wooden staff. To win the game they must knock spikes off the opponent, and also collect them all, then place them around a pedestal, when they are all placed they let out a golden tooth necklace. They must run this to the other pedestal from there.
Both people though are allowed to take the spikes back, and place them back on the amour. And when the necklace is revealed, take it, and place it back on the same pedestal to win.

Boltage- I think it should be between Tato, or Mountain Maze. They sound kind of brutal. . .hope you have a good time describing zeke fight scene.

Well we are supposedly hugely powerful so on this planet i gain power much faster than on Earth. This is the huge power thing that has affected my appearance, shocked April, etc. Its also why I keep ignoing April when she says to give power sparingly.

Oh. That's what I thought you meant. Alright. (:

Oh and Bolt...I would go with Mountain Maze...definetly my favorite.

So, are they all going in the games?

No I thought Zeke was going to be in the games. I'm confused. So are our character's supposed to go on a like 'rescue mission' type thing? I'm not sure. There was something up in the sky like a big television or something. Mikael had saw Zeke in the mountains. I don't know. ):

~Nicole