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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:33 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Okay, if their is any questions or suggestions, just tell me here.
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:40 am
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Okay when we start I didn't know if you wanted to start on Earth or on the other world they're transported to?

Second, if anyone wants a second character to be in the other world thats fine. You can either be a freind or an enemy of the group.

Last, a plot idea I had was for the group to have been split up due to the transportation. So first they have to find each other. If that happens then we'll need to see who will be in what group.

Tell me what you think and give any ideas that you have. Can't wait!!!


~Tiger
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:54 am
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Dreamwalker says...



I think we should start off on earth. It will give us all time to get in some added character developement and all get used to eachothers characters before we jump into the storyline, if thats alright with you :)
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:18 am
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That's a good point. I hadn't thought of that Dream. I was actually thinking we should be on Earth first when I wrote it, but good point. Thanks (:

~Tiger
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:19 am
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Yeah I agree with the above
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:31 am
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Alright! I think (unless someone comes along and disagrees giving a goos reason to start in the other world) we'll go with that. Anyone have any plot ideas? Any ideas at all? All are welcome (:

~Tiger
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:33 am
Bloo says...



Maybe they could have Midterms or something.

So they could all be in a study group together, so everyone would be together.

Yeah not that great, but I'm sleepy.
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:36 am
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I think it's a good idea. When others comment we'll see what else to put with it. (:

~Tiger
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:51 am
jok101 says...



You could say that all the friends got a message or something that told them to be their so later on in the story they start to wonder if their some one pulling the strings behind the scenes. What about that?
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2009 10:20 am
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Interesting. Like their's a character who wants them dead from the other world? Maybe he has the mirror? Maybe it's a grude that formed long ago when their ancestors were banished? Nice, Jok. Let's see what the others think.

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Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:46 pm
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jok101 says...



oh and also since Jason teleportation powers I was thinking they'll probably blame him at first. I'm itching to post so I'm going to but nothing magor to the story.
  





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Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:15 pm
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Okay. Well it dosen't really matter until we get to the other world. Though, I'll think we'll be through with all this by then. (:
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:38 pm
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I like joks idea.
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:17 pm
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Thanks Bolt. Me too. I think we'll go with that, when the time comes. (:
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:14 pm
In_the_Moonlight says...



i like all of the ideas. So are we starting? :D
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