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I guess the ones who have not posted yet can stay.

But if it turns out Jesse doesn't help the escape, then we can still go on.

David can escape, and then release the others, then the plan goes the same.

Once we get into the city Red will have a red pixie cut and brown eyes.

I'm going to post as soon as I finish reading the posts...

MJ

Jesse doesn't need to escape anymore, but if you guys end up back in your cells, she can do a check up on blood pressure or something, and maybe they can talk.

I decided I should get kittykat's character in the plot. Rello is against Partials, so this is going to be tricky. But it can work. I have a plan.

I also believe that Jesse could be the bridge between both of the plans. She can connect them, so that the force could be more powerful or rivalry would start.

~Incognito

Okay Then the when caught in the act could still be there, so the other group gets stuck, runs away Fro
the guards and find my group,and then they escape toghther

But then the guards. Could chase them to the city and they split up into smaller groupsof two or three,a so they can't fight right away

Sorry if there are tons upon tons of mistakes on her. But I'm righting on my itouch

On your Itouch me too some of my longest post have been on my itouch like the post I just did. Yeah I know it was random but hey I needed to write about something

boltageman wrote:Okay Then the when caught in the act could still be there, so the other group gets stuck, runs away Fro
the guards and find my group,and then they escape toghther

That sounds good.

But then the guards. Could chase them to the city and they split up into smaller groupsof two or three,a so they can't fight right away
So does that.

I like where this plot is going, but perhaps someone can right it out clearly once we have it defined so everyone can see it easily?

I'll let you guys know if I think of any ideas.

Oh, and when Cam gets to the city, she's going to have to have some type of denture teeth thing, because her teeth are really pointy. She'll wear contacts to make her eyes look muddy brown, and keep her black hair and her pale skin.

Well that explains the drastic lack of commas.

When ever I use my touch, I have to go slow, because I have to remember, space, coma, period, other stuff.

Also how often do you use your touch, because if often, that explains so much.

Can someone help enter my character in? I seem to have missed the start so my character is long past being injected in there right away. Philip is a shy character so I dont know quite how to add him.. oh this storybook is stressful. I come back like two days later and theres five pages.. I cant keep up. Also if anyone could summarize what has already occured the please please, i would ask that you help me out. I just dont want to read about 5 pages of this discussion and then five pages of posts... that takes up a terribly long time in which I just dont want to spend.. sorry.

Dremawalker, if okay with you I can have David break your guy out when they escape, he is a partial if I'm correct.

And so far not much has happened.

My guy tried to escape, there was an incident with Red in the hall.

The two escape group began to plot, John tried to escape, and failed

Jesse is currently treating a fake injured Whitney (right, I forget which of the two went there)

David took the role of a guard, and is going to have a break out later in the storybook day.

And everyone else should be in the gym, if not said otherwise.

That would be awesome! Thanks boltageman

So Yah, maybe I'll just introduce my character as he's in his cell or something. Maybe he has the cell next to your characters or something? He'll probably be half-transformed from being weak or something. I dunno, just the fun of it all.

Hey guys, Red's relayed a meeting. We're escaping at one.

I would like to post the opening of the meeting in the morning. Then someone else can add to it and then end it.

Is that okay with everyone?

MJ

And anyone on Red's side for this, when they post the escape, have David release Red and Cam first, then have the talk and have him release the others.

So Whitney, Charlotte, and Josh...are they joining up with the others to escape? They certainly can. Whitney is attempting to recruit Jesse to let down the electricity on the fences. She can relay the messege of when (it can probably stay around oneish) the fences will be unelectrified.

Whitney will unwillingly dye her hair black and get brownish colored contacts once she escapes. She loves her white hair. Will Charlotte be sticking with Whitney and Josh after the escape? The twins will most definatly stick together. And also, is Echelon still in this storybook? I'll pm her and find out.

boltageman wrote:Okay Then the when caught in the act could still be there, so the other group gets stuck, runs away Fro
the guards and find my group,and then they escape toghther

But then the guards. Could chase them to the city and they split up into smaller groupsof two or three,a so they can't fight right away

well I pitched this a bit back, what do you think of this idea

I like them all having to split up into smaller groups. Maybe they can all plan to meet somewhere or something. And someone could be a traitor and give away their location to the scientists or something! I don't know, just spouting off ideas haha. I do like the having to split though.

What's up with the two groups escaping? Someone let me know if they are going to work together or not.

P.S. someone who knows whats happening should post the general direction of the plot here so we are all on the same page =)