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I just said in my pitch.

Jesse is caught when disarming the fence, and then your escape group is chased to my group, and they escape together, because David is the only one who can touch the gate when powered on.

My character was just talking to Jesse. I don't know if the other group had any conversations with her yet. But they could all somehow get together before the escape to coordinate plans or something.

Also, I kind of added that the fences can only be powered down one at a time and only for a minute or so. So like Jesse would power down the first, they would get over it and it would become electrified again, and then she would power down the second, they would get over and it would become electrified again. How's that work?

I was just thinking she would get caught, so then she would get in trouble for trying to get them to escape.

But okay.

Hey just to let y'all know, I might not be able to post tonight. But I'll try.

I'm visiting my brother for Easter weekend. I'll try to get on...

Could I post the beginning of the meeting late tonight?

MJ

I'm okay with that.

Remember that David is on guard there, so he will be getting in the conversation.

Jesse could still get caught, she could have only powered down the first fence for them to get over. Then maybe whoever is the eel (sorry I can't remember the name!) would have to help everyone over the fence in the water. Plot twists, intrigue, obstacles =)

That was the thing I said, about three times.

I was thinking they would stay separate, because no one in out group wants to trust the scientists.

And then when the two find each other, they think that Jesse betrayed them, and later on when they meet up there can be drama.

What about that?

Will someone please pull in my character and explain to me what's going on?!

I'll bring Danny in during the escape.

So far we are working on that plan, because there were two different groups that assembled for it.

But right now so far David, me, Red, MJ, and Cam, Music lover, John, Jok (right), are one group.

And Whitney, Lauren, charlotte, white tiger, and I think Echelon's character, are the other, with Jesse, Incognito Temptation, maybe joining them.

So far Dream walker and Lereina are going to be brought in during the escape with my guy's team, if you want to come with us.

Thanx boltageman. I don't really mind which group I'm thrown into, I just want to start posting again.

Okay, sorry about the misunderstanding. We'll escape on our own I suppose, but you can still take advantage of the fences being down. You all did have a plan to get through without letting down the electricity anyways.

YES!!!!!

DAVID, HE RIPS IT APPART BECAUSE HE CAN'T BE HURT BY ELECTRICITY, I SAID THAT 5 BILLION TIMES ALREADY!!!!!!!

Sorry, just get mad when I have to repeat myself so much.

And the electricity is back up, Dr. Barrick did it, and caught Jesse, so you have to use that plan to get through with out the shut down, or find our group.

I just want to clarify what happened in my post - ONE of the fences if back up (That would be the first fence) the second fence is down... So whichever group is inbetween the fences, their way is clear.

I'm SO SORRY you guys, but my brother was on doing his homework!

Did y'all escape yet?!

SORRY!

MJ

Okay, so we're in the city now...


What to do? Hah. Err, why don't we bring the doctors in after us, and we have this whole "hide-and-seek" thing in the village? There could be betrayals between the two forces (doctors helping the escapees, escapees helping doctors) and just bring on this big montage of trying to survive.

Let me know what you think