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Fri Oct 10, 2008 1:23 am
Maybe says...



Here's the discussion thread. Discuss away, ask questions, etc.

-May
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 2:49 am
StolenHearts. says...



So in the twins sorta thing one has to be bad and the other good yes?
If so i may need to choose bad because singer is good as well as mine....
  





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Fri Oct 10, 2008 11:43 am
Jaden G. says...



What is the basic plot line? I mean like what is the goal between the good and the bad besides fighting? Are we trying to race to some object or are the bad guys just starting chaos for the fun of it?

Hi Maybe, love what you had to say with Sam. See you on the other DT.

Bye
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"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:54 pm
StolenHearts. says...



Hey Jaden Just wondering if perhaps Larella and Edward could have love interest?
They have a lot in common, consider it?
  





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Sun Oct 12, 2008 6:00 pm
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StolenHearts: No, the twins don't have to be good and evil. It's just that if you have more than one character, they can't both/all be on the same side.

Jaden: The plot line is open for suggestions. I was thinking that possibly the bad could be planning to launch some bioterrorism attack or something along those lines. But there really is nothing set yet. If anyone has any suggestions, please feel free to contribute.

-May
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Sun Oct 12, 2008 8:05 pm
Miss Slade says...



um... I have two characters both are just human and they are sisters, one is seven and the other eighteen, can they still be on the same side or can the younger just not know about whats going on?

and my oldest character, Drake(she is a girl) needs a love interest, XD
You Cry, I Cry.
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You Jump Off Of A Cliff,
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Sun Oct 12, 2008 9:43 pm
StolenHearts. says...



Do you think in the future Raye could have a power? I had this whole story planned out for him...would that be okay if it was a completely different power. His twin could be Sylvia if that is okay, but this is later in the story..
  





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Sun Oct 12, 2008 11:21 pm
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Miss Anonymous: So long as your characters don't both have powers, they're allowed to be on the same side.

StolenHearts: Sure, that should be fine. Just be sure to talk it out with Miss Anonymous.

Here is a list of who is who.

Fire: Leal Pierre. Female. Good. TNCowgirl.

Water: Charcoal (Charly) Ndunga. Female. Guardian. Via.

Blood: Nathaniel Destrell. Male. Bad. Maybe.

Weather: Kyle Destrell. Male. Good. Maybe.

Stone: Claimed by Angel of Death.

Wind: Lorelai (Lore) DeTaros. Female. Guradians. Layeun.

Lava: Claimed by phantom_blackfire_wings.

Ice: Vual Walsh. Male. Bad. Grey.

Mind: Claimed by Bella.

Matter: Maisy. Female. Bad. kitty15.

Body: Yentaro Tegusha. Male. Bad. DSF.

Emotion: Audi Rosario. Female. Bad. kittykat.

Spirit: Larella J. Martinez. Female. Bad. StolenHearts.

Nature: Marissa Snader. Female. Good. *singerofthenight*.

Time: Noah Miles. Male. Guardians. Maybe.

Sound: Kathy Lawrence. Female. Guardians. Jaden G.

Electricity: Colt Rose. Male. Bad. TNCowgirl.

Metal: Carson. Male. Guardians. Billy.

Dark: Edward Marconi. Male. Bad. Jaden G.

Light: Jason. Male. Good. Billy.

Other:

Raye C. Martinez. Male. StolenHearts.

Katherine (Katy). Female. October Girl.

Sage. Female. October Girl.

Azrael Linx. Male. Light_Devil.

Drake Storm. Female. Miss Anonymous.

Sylvia Storm. Female. Miss Anonymous.
Last edited by Maybe on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:02 am
October Girl says...



when do we start?
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™
  





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Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:40 am
Jaden G. says...



Sure Edward and Larella can have a love interest, Stolen Hearts. I like Maybe's idea for bioterrorism. GO ANARCHY! Sorry I'm hyper.
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Mon Oct 13, 2008 10:16 pm
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I'll be starting the storybook either later tonight, or tomorrow somtime.

And Bella has decided she doesn't have enough time to participate in the storybook, so the elements of Sound and Mind have opened up.

-May
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:43 am
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What am I?????


Element?
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-
  





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Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:51 pm
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Lord Anzius: I'm not sure, I think you were emotion after someone else had claimed it. But Mind and Sound are free as far as I know (I haven't checked the main thread quite yet) so if they are, feel free to be one of those elements.

Groupings:

The Good:
Leal Pierre. (Fire)
Kyle Destrell (Weather)
Marissa Snader (Nature)
Jason (Light)
Azrael
Drake
Sylvia

The Bad:
Nathaniel Destrell (Blood)
Vual Walsh (Ice)
Maisy (Matter)
Yentaro Tegusha (Body)
Audi Rosario (Emotion)
Larella J. Martinez (Spirit)
Colt Rose (Electricity)
Edward Marconi (Dark)
No more Bad allowed. We're already at 8 characters.

The Guardians:
Charcoal (Charly) Ndunga (Water)
Lorelai (Lore) DeTaros (Wind)
Noah Miles (Time)
Kathy Lawrence (Sound)
Carson (Metal)
Katherine (The Dead/ Ashes)
Jessica (Jessa) Mercy (Lava)
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:07 am
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I is lost. :"(
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:06 pm
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Miss Slade says...



I need someone for Drake(is a GIRL) to fall in love with, any takers would be nice...
You Cry, I Cry.
You Laugh, I Laugh.
You Jump Off Of A Cliff,
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