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Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:11 pm
Maybe says...



I'm making this so we have somewhere to share ideas. It will act as any other discussion thread.

I had an idea on how to bring Aedomir's character in with the rest of ours. What if he was captured for 'seeing' the princess (Rory's character) and the guards or whoever throws him in the castle dungeons, even though he is innocent and Raxven is the one who they really want.

Blair hears this story and goes down to the dungeon, fearing that is IT Raxven, only to find Aedomir's character. She helps him escape, knowing he's innocent, and takes him with her when she goes to see Raxven that night.

Just an idea.

I don't know how Luna, TN, and/or anyone else I may have forgotten want to meet up, but I think we should start getting all our characters together or else some of us might get left behind as the story progresses.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:15 pm
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:24 pm
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ok sounds good, so Blair is going to sneak out again tonight and someone is going to find her missing, maybe Leo, and she could bump into Aedomir in the forrest or something and the gaurds or whoever could take him like you said, I mean that's one option, Idk though..
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:44 am
This_is_history says...



That sounds really good, May. And how many characters do we have, exactly?
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:53 am
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Characters List:

Maybe: Raxven and Casius.

This_is_history: Fye

TNCowgirl: Maybell (Tiny)

Aedomir: Sir Aedomir

LunaBuna43: Naomi

RoryLegend: Princess Blair

Those are the people who have posted recently.
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:59 am
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Ok, thanks! :)
*grins*
Hey, Maybe, about the situation w/ Fyn and Rax. Is Fyn gonna be too clingy for your taste? Cuz I can def. tone it down. I just love writing vulnerable, scared and innocent. It's fun. :)
But if you don't like it, I can calm it down.
Just tell me. :)
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:07 am
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No, it's fine, i don't mind.

-May
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:14 am
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Yay! :) *grins idiotically*
EDIT: You guys, I am so sorry, but I'm not going to be able to have internet until April 4th. I'll catch up when I get back. I don't know what to do about Fyn, though. I'm sorry.
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Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:16 pm
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Ye, sounds great!
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Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:06 pm
This_is_history says...



I'm back! Everyone can rejoice! (just kidding.)
I got home early! yoohoo! :)
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:37 am
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Welcome back, Elise. I'll try to bring the story back to the front page...

-May
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:50 am
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Yay! I can't wait to get back to it! :)
-Elise
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 1:12 am
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is it coming back? *excitment!*
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Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:43 am
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*are we talking about paradise?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Tue Jun 03, 2008 1:13 am
Maybe says...



Rory, an idea (or two) of how Rax and Blair could've met...

1. Blair could've been kidnapped a few years back, and Raxven and Casius could've been the ones to have to go and get her back?

2. Rax could've been injured in one of the battles in the past, and only the healers in the castle could help him, and one day Blair accidentally stumbled into the room he was being kept in?

3. Random meeting in the woods when Blair was out riding her horse one day and Raxven and Casius could've been out hunting/walking/practicing? (This one could mean they met when they were much younger then would be possible in the first two).

Just a few ideas.
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