z

Young Writers Society


The Black Plague DT



User avatar
135 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1040
Reviews: 135
Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:45 am
cat4prowl says...



yeah thats what i meant woops hehe sorry...
  





User avatar
142 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1825
Reviews: 142
Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:44 am
Bella says...



I wanted to make a suggestion.

Before you post, it is really helpful if you post your characters name. Most people are donig this, but Ghostwriter, your posts are slightly confusing in that aspect. (If that makes any sense).

Just a suggestion. *shrug*

Also, for those of you who didn't notice, I am trying to get most, if not all, of the female pirates into the cabin boys quarters. It makes sense to me that they'd be more comfortable sleeping in a different room than the guys, especially after they're found out. Heck, perhaps they'll figure each other out first? (just throwing more ideas out there).
~Bella~
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





User avatar
12 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 890
Reviews: 12
Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:49 am
Ghostwriter says...



I Would, but I'm a non comformist.
A person's heart is like a painting.
Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.
  





User avatar
116 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 10241
Reviews: 116
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:00 am
Maybe says...



I agree with Bella. People posting their characters name before their actual post would help a lot. I've gone as far as adding Arthur Hearthorn's status on the ship, as well as a date with my posts.

-May
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.
  





User avatar
142 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1825
Reviews: 142
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:04 am
Bella says...



And it's not technically conforming, so much as being thoughtful of hte people you are writing with. It's not as if we're asking you to change your writing style or anything.

~Bells~
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





User avatar
12 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 890
Reviews: 12
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:07 am
Ghostwriter says...



...I was joking.
If it makes you so uneasy, I will do it.
A person's heart is like a painting.
Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.
  





User avatar
142 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1825
Reviews: 142
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:11 am
Bella says...



I have just determined the worst thing about the internet is that you can't hear the other peoples voice and you never know when they're serious *glares*

Lol sorry if I sounded super-ticked then :D

Thanks
~bells~
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





User avatar
63 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 63
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:28 am
LunaBuna43 says...



Pirate song... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AM1NUGlo2ww
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
My first puppers Pikapet
My second puppers Pikapet
Check out my new group! Roleplayers Unite!
  





User avatar
93 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 2832
Reviews: 93
Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:16 am
~Volant~ says...



ahaha...most of the time my post starts with the name of my character, but it's part of the story...is that okay? lol.
Where are we going?
  





User avatar
110 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1844
Reviews: 110
Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:55 pm
TNCowgirl says...



So everything said so far I agree with. :P
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???
  





User avatar
135 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1040
Reviews: 135
Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:15 pm
View Likes
cat4prowl says...



posting your name before your post helps a lot, and it's really easy... so please do. or else. hehe.


oh btw lunabuna, that's an.... interesting pirate song. catchy.lol.
  





User avatar
93 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 2832
Reviews: 93
Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:57 pm
~Volant~ says...



ahaha nice song, Luna, mate. heh. Wow. :D Now it'll be stuck in my head all day long...>.< lol
Where are we going?
  





User avatar
63 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 63
Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:16 am
LunaBuna43 says...



Hehe sing along time!

I'm a pirate, that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

Yo ho, My friends I have a tale,
Of treasure. plunder, sea and sail,
Me story's bigger than a whale,
It gets so deep you'll have to bail.

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

I like to fish,
I like to fight,
I like to stay up half the night,
When I say starbird ye go right,
Me ma she say, 'Ye look afright'

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

I got no hand but that's me hook,
My blue tease in this chest I took,
I plunder stuff but I'm no crook,
They'll write about me in a book!

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

That's all there is to this here song,
I hope it didn't last to long,
A pirate's life might just be wrong,
So grow up nice, be big an' strong!

Oh! I'm a pirate that I be,
I sail me ship upon the sea,
I stay up late till half past three,
And that's a peg below me knee!

That's a peg below me knee!!!
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
My first puppers Pikapet
My second puppers Pikapet
Check out my new group! Roleplayers Unite!
  





User avatar
142 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1825
Reviews: 142
Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:31 am
Bella says...



lol, niice Luna. It is quite catchy *is bobbing head back and forth while listening and posting*

So, as I said in the SB, I might not post much this week. And I have no idea what to dio with Tristan/Isabella.

Erm...there was something else I watned to say, but i convientently forgot it...

Oh yeah! I was thinking, just as a random idea, we could bring Toribrio(?) with us, perhaps? Just a thought...
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?
  





User avatar
135 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1040
Reviews: 135
Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:24 am
cat4prowl says...



I think that would be interesting, and would probably work since Toribrio would mostly be protective of the maps because they are a family heirloom. If she was interested in the treasure, she would have gone after it already. So she might want to come along just to make sure they are safe and also maybe because she wonders if it's real.

As for what to do with Tristan/Isabella I don't have any ideas :( sorry. But I do have a question, since Toribrio is going to be a character that everyone can freely use, what should she be like? Any ideas, please share...
  








An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
— Unknown