Hm, I see... Maybe it'd be easier if I just post again to get the ball rolling, if that's alright with everyone. Seems like it might be the easiest way to introduce a new character and all. Is that good with everyone?
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
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