I'm really excited about where this story is going so far! I'm thinking maybe Miss Thatcher could be in cahoots with the killer? Just because of how she entered the classroom and was all sweaty and unaccounted for. Perhaps she could have been helping with Sidonie's murder.
Hm, so I just had an idea- depending on how the dorms work, maybe during the detention scene I could introduce some of Mary's dorm buddies? Some more npcs that could act as friend or foe
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or cannon-foder for the killer?
Just thought that maybe more names would be useful in the future
quick heads up if my next post is super long it's because I'm introducing Mary's roommates as npcs that might become friend, foe or dead and lumping Mary's punishment in with it, so uh, sorry if there's a big ol' block of text haha <:)
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
So haha funny story. I've started working on my next response and since Mary's detention is only twenty minutes, she might leave within the same message so... yeah if it's alright with everyone I'll post it after everyone else does cuz I'll probably write sidonie's death in my next post if thats okay?
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