Just to be clear, no one but Queenie will have been able to see Bobby. I'm pretty sure I specified clearly enough in the post itself, but I just wanted to make sure. There is literally nothing in the world Bobby is better at than hiding and sneaking around. Please don't nerf my character with your meta-knowledge.
Will do! Loki and Thor wouldn't have been able to notice Bobby, anyways, but I'll make sure to keep them oblivious.
Also, I'm not @Yoshikrab, so I'm not sure how important this is for the plot. But I think the characters are supposed to lose their memories and only know their names and that they're in the First Jungle, @TheMulticoloredCyr. I don't have a problem with Bobby and Queenie not losing their memories if Yoshikrab doesn't, but I just wanted to let you know in case you didn't see me ask about that on the previous page!
Oh yeah, @Magebird is correct. However, @TheMulticoloredCyr there is a loophole. You can sometimes remember random things that were important in the character's past life. For example, Amoku remembered a "Lord of the Sky" even though he didn't know who this "Lord of the Sky" was.
Well then, there is no way in heck that Queenie wouldn't remember 'Father', and, for Bobby-immediately-running-off-on-their-own reasons, Bobby and Queenie need to know each other, so that part kinda needs to stay.
I'm gonna NG the see about those edits tonight. I was going to last night but it was a bad time so I wasn't able to. I'll make sure the actual actions of the characters are the same so it doesn't affect anything.
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