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The First Jungle [DT]



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Wed Mar 10, 2021 6:56 pm
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yosh says...



Let the chaos commence
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Thu Mar 11, 2021 2:49 pm
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blueca says...



Yo, I'd like to join, if that's okay! I'll probably wait until after the harpy stuff gets resolved to drop my character in, but adding a little to the chaos might be fun. His info is in the character profile thread.
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Thu Mar 11, 2021 3:13 pm
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yosh says...



@blueca thanks! We're glad to have you here!
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Mon Mar 15, 2021 7:53 pm
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Mageheart says...



I want to give @RavenLord and @TheMulticoloredCyr a chance to post before I go again, but I can't wait to write Loki trying to keep the plan/conversation positive and failing miserably after Amoku's last comment. :P
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Mon Mar 15, 2021 7:55 pm
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yosh says...



:) sure!

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Mon Mar 15, 2021 7:59 pm
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Mageheart says...



Whoops. >>

Sorry about that, GrandWild!
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Mon Mar 15, 2021 8:34 pm
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Teddybear says...



Y'all can go.
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Wed Mar 17, 2021 2:44 pm
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Mageheart says...



I can't post for another few hours, but I'll try getting a post up later today! I can't wait to have Loki react to Fabian showing up. c:

(It'll also be fun writing him reacting to the plan. :P)
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 12:27 pm
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Mageheart says...



I finally posted! :)
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 4:06 pm
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yosh says...



alright do you guys think we should somehow move away from the harpy cause i think we've been talking about the harpy for ages and haven't done anything.
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 4:26 pm
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Mageheart says...



That sounds like a plan to me!
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 7:43 pm
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Teddybear says...



Queenie has made a suggestion that will hopefully spur things into a scene change here soon. I suggest skipping over a little bit of time here and there to speed things along into the action. Maybe decide here what happens in advance and have the next poster summarize whatever the plan was and how it went.

Maybe a group of, like, three of them end up killing a deer or something while the rest stay behind setting up the rest of the trap or something. The next poster could say something like, "While so-and-so hunted down the buck, the rest of the group worked together to quickly assemble the trap" or something.

idk, I just think we've been lingering too much and I'd really like to move on to the part of the story where literally anything actually happens.

Edit: Just saw Grand's post. I stand by basically everything I just said, just adjusted for that.
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 7:44 pm
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Ljungtroll says...



Tarkin took off immediately. He loves hunting
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 7:48 pm
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Teddybear says...



Tarkin, the only plot progressor in the party.
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Thu Mar 18, 2021 7:49 pm
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Ljungtroll says...



And the most likely to do something that will likely set off a dangerous chain of events, knowing that child of chaos
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