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Hey, I just started the beginning of the maybe-action if that's okay. It's where Rocs (Obviously sent by Cronus) come down to attack the vulnerable mortal forms of the gods. Whoever continues the post could probably make it where most of the gods are still intact, but Victoria is captured (not killed, because Cronus really wants that victory).

That was my idea at least. What are you guys' thoughts on this?

I really like your post! The only thing I would say is that roc’s are from Middle Eastern mythology, and Cronos is Greek mythology. This is just a nitpick, so you can keep it that way if you want to! I just like to keep things accurate.

@Valkyria Yeah at some point I realized that mistake, but I love rocs anyway so I decided it would be okay to use them.

I like that idea! I'm also torn for the reason that @Valkyria was - since it's a different kind of mythology - but maybe we can find some kind of Greek equivalent?

Assuming that @TheRealEuphoria is okay with that, of course! It's their storybook, so I definitely don't want to change whatever plot they already have in mind for the story.

I think we should find a greek equivalent. The Rocs are a great idea, though. I was a little confused on what Rocs were at first so I had to do some research.

We have to keep in mind that Cronus is VERY powerful and can basically conjure anything. I’m sure ya’ll are familiar in Percy Jackson, if so, remember the end of the second movie when Cronus is revealed? I was thinking he was more so powerful among those lines, with an army and such....

When the Gods arrive at the Empire State Building, i was thinking something could happen there, and that’s where Victoria would be taken, mostly to avoid the clutter of so much action within one location. Rocs are a little too... unrealistic. The Gods have plenty of time to receive the prophecies before Cronus attempts to take Earth. When I mean obstacles in the way, I mean maybe some goons, some weaknesses ( hint hint ), stuff like that, up until Cronus gets closer to Earth.

Any ideas for equivalents?

well griffins are basically greek rocs

or maybe

uh

a minotaur?

also sorry for straying a little from the plot

Griffins would be fun! My first thought was harpies because they're Greek and have to do with birds, but I'm not really sure they'd side with Cronus - I don't know enough about them and their lore.

Also, @TheRealEuphoria, I was definitely thrown off a little when you mentioned the movies instead of the books. The Riordanverse fan in me desperately wants to recommend that you check out the books if you like the movies - they cover so much more and are really entertaining.

But fangirling aside, I see what you mean. One of the big things in Percy Jackson no matter who the big villain happens to be is that the villain can always get someone who's upset with the gods on their side - even other gods. Minor spoilers for the first book here, so read the spoiler at your risk:



So it might be fun to sit down and have a scheming session on who exactly would join Cronus, and which of those people would be most likely to take Nike.

I was thinking harpies too @Magebird, and I would like to to suggest Eris to join Cronus. If I remember correctly, she is the goddess of chaos and discord.

Persephone too maybe? Cronus could grant her freedom from Hades in return.

The Persephone x Hades shipper in me just died a little at that suggestion, but I have to remember the OG myths didn't have their relationship be as respectful as my favorite retellings do now. >>

(On the topic of retellings, Lore Olympus and Punderworld are both really interesting retellings of Greek mythology! If anyone needs inspiration for this, I highly recommend checking them out.)

But I'm definitely down for Eris! Maybe Hera could also be up for joining Cronus's side? She might want to get revenge on Zeus for cheating 24/7, while also wanting to insure that her kids don't get hurt by his return.

Alternatively, we could have some kind of blackmail situation with some gods! Cronus could threaten to hurt someone or take something they care about, forcing them to join up with him.

Magebird wrote:The Persephone x Hades shipper in me just died a little at that suggestion, but I have to remember the OG myths didn't have their relationship be as respectful as my favorite retellings do now. >>

(On the topic of retellings, Lore Olympus and Punderworld are both really interesting retellings of Greek mythology! If anyone needs inspiration for this, I highly recommend checking them out.)

But I'm definitely down for Eris! Maybe Hera could also be up for joining Cronus's side? She might want to get revenge on Zeus for cheating 24/7, while also wanting to insure that her kids don't get hurt by his return.

Alternatively, we could have some kind of blackmail situation with some gods! Cronus could threaten to hurt someone or take something they care about, forcing them to join up with him.

Blackmail sounds nice. That would up the action and suspense.

Persephone is a good idea, but I’d like to point out that in the original original myths, she had a different name and went to the underworld by choice. Her original name meant little girl and she traveled to the underworld and was kind of just like “yeah I’m staying here” and Hades was like “uh... okay?” And then it was only when Demeter found out that Zeus got involved. He renamed her Persephone and came up with the deal about half of her time in both worlds. Persephone also basically means chaos bringer (if I remember correctly) so she was renamed because of how ridiculously chaotic things got when she decided to stay in the underworld and her mother disagreed. Just throwing that out there in case anyone is interested or can think of a twist off of that!

1. I think Apollo can be a traitor. His pride and love for music can be used to Cronus's advantage to sway Apollo to his side. (And also its been a long time since I roleplayed as a villain)

2. I really want to get a third character since we probably need Nike captured and I'm in the process of figuring out what I can do to make Apollo a traitor. So, i was just wondering, @TheRealEuphoria , if its okay that I get a third character?

What third character were you thinking? @Yoshikrab I’m sure it’s fine