"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin
Just so you guys know - when referring to footsteps being 'off' Cassie is unsure about Grier, who was shown on his way towards them. (I don't know if he actually walks, so I tried to be vague about what she's hearing and/or feeling.
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin
Oh, okay @RavenLord! I tried to be vague so maybe it is the scratching against the bark she hears or the branches swaying ever so slightly in the wind?
That could work! He's very quiet but there will definitely be leaves rustling
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin
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