Young Writers Society

did i have any idea what i was doing? maybe not, but I figured my next post could be the "where the gun" post and I used this one to set that up instead

HOPEFULLY THIS WORKS I WAS JUST WINGING IT
I'm less confident on this one, so let me know if there's things about your characters I should change

i LOVED it!! this line made me laugh:

"Shh! You're interrupting this very riveting news report on the price of butter."

mags has such a great sense of humor lol. I'll try to get my post out by the end of the day, but I can't guarantee that :\

hahah THANK U :,)

also i look forward to ur post when u get it up LZ!

great post, sound!
i for one welcome this report on butter

Posted! I hope it's alright, I rushed to write it a bit.

I like it! I'm glad Adeline and Mags got a moment to sit together!! We haven't really seen them interact much directly

@JasmineFelicia, I think it's your turn to post.

Since we’re nearing the weekend, I can write up a post and split it into two (or three!) When it comes to me again! Just to get our number up since we’ve only got 4/10

Sounds good! I don't know if I'll be able to do that too (I have loads of Literature work), but I'll try!

Oh! Sorry! I didn't realize it was my turn!

I'm done!

I loved it!

goodness the cop seems so mean. like trespassing on private property without a warrant (or maybe he has one?? idk bros) like that and just being all ominous and omg it was amazing lol.

omg OMG OMG OMGMGGMGGGMGMMGMGMGG aAAAAAAAAAA WHAT DO WE DO WHAT DO WE DO?????

WHAT SHOULD THE COP DO??? IM SCREAMING OMG
DO THEY
ARE THEy ? ? ? GOING TO GET ARRESSTED??????????????
*goes berserk*

THAT SAID AWESOME POST JAZZY

*surpise conflict happens*
*i go berserk*

great post!
losing my mind i love this. conflict who? i am excited.

CONFLICT i love it

just planning ahead i think the men would go to jail and adeline and mags would see this out the window and be like "oH nOoOoOoOo" and then sommers comes back and they tell him and he's also like "oH nOoOoOoOo"

and then on the flip side bo's just like "yo bros imma break us out of jail" and verbally liam and levi are like "wait what dude" but internally theyre like "I KNEW THIS GUY WAS A CRIMINAL" or whatever. and then something happens im not really sure yet.

oh and sommers would get in trouble for being an accessory or accomplice to the "crime" after the fact because he hid them and perhaps tampering with evidence (i.e. the truck)