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An Unexpected Time {OOC}



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Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:12 pm
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Corvid says...



great post, @JasmineFelicia! i thought the part about the bunk beds was hilarious

cue the internal monologue: dont be suspicious dONT BE SUSPICIOUS
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Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:14 pm
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Corvid says...



also @soundofmind I should be around tonight to collab!
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Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:19 pm
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looseleaf says...



The post was awesome! Five sandwiches?? Man I can hardly eat two.

I'm thinking we'll skip @Tenyo this week (unless they say otherwise), so we'll just keep starting the week with Jasmine and ending the week with sound until they rejoin!
  





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Mon Nov 09, 2020 1:22 pm
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soundofmind says...



YESSSS YESSS YESSSSSSSSS IM EXCITEDDDDDDDDDDSDDDDDD TO WRITE THIS
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Thu Nov 12, 2020 2:18 am
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soundofmind says...



SORRY WE BROKE THE POSTING ORDER - the post ended up being so long it made more sense to split it for LSS reasons ashlkfjghl so I also went lol
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Thu Nov 12, 2020 2:44 am
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looseleaf says...



OMG MAGS AND BO ARE SO CUTE the way bo describes his face and mags' personality and liam being like "youre fine" and adeline being like "no your not just SHUT UP" and sommers telling them to get ready to bed like they're children and what im trying to get to is that they were great posts!!

also i laughed out loud at venom and anaconda lol. ill try to get a post out sometime tomorrow!! dont know if levi, adeline, and liam's conversation will ever be as good as bo and mags' tho
  





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Thu Nov 12, 2020 12:07 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



I LOVED THE POST! IT WAS AWESOME. I let my sister read the story, and when it came to the conversation you just posted she was very happy. You wrote Liam excellently. He eats very much.
Hi, the name is Jasmine, but you can call me Jaz! Nice to meet you :D !
  





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Thu Nov 12, 2020 12:21 pm
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JasmineFelicia says...



Also - courtesy of my sister - a ship name - Androlia
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Thu Nov 12, 2020 12:33 pm
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soundofmind says...



I’m so glad you guys loved the posts!! They were so fun to write!!! :D Also omg ANDROLIA IS ADMITTEDLY BETTER THAN BOGNOLIA, which looks like bologna

Also Jazzy omg I’m glad your sis following aling and enjoying the story hahah
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Thu Nov 12, 2020 12:54 pm
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looseleaf says...



androlia sounds like the andromeda galaxy (sort of??) and i love it lol
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2020 12:06 am
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looseleaf says...



Posted! I hope I wrote your characters alright.

and yes adeline stole sommer's sons undergarments. dont judge her.
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2020 12:21 am
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soundofmind says...



NO JUDGING HERE

lol, I love the awkwardness of Liam, Levi, and Adeline's convo vs Bo and Mags

ADDY BEING DISAPPOINTED THAT BO LEFT THO EVEN THO SHE THINKS HE'S SCARY??? CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT???

Addy: ur scary and sus but at least ur not boring
Bo: ... thanks????
Addy: *narrows eyes*

Now I firmly believe Addy and Bo should have a convo so maybe Addy can be less suspicious of him and they can BO-nd a little bit or something see what i did there

I think Levi and Bo are also in a similiar boat... Levi gives me vibes that he doesn't really want much to do w/Bo and like Ten wrote in the wfp, they just both come from very different lives

Also Jazzy I believe you're next! Will Liam go explore the attic/closet? lol
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Fri Nov 13, 2020 8:43 am
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JasmineFelicia says...



I loved your post LZ! Yes, Liam will explore the attic wiggles eyebrows conspiratorially
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Fri Nov 13, 2020 8:44 am
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soundofmind says...



Now I'm imagining Liam having to tip-toe around Bo sleeping on the floor and comedically trying not to make any noise

I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR POST JAZZY
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