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The Pheligian Falcon: Prison Break [OOC]



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Sun Sep 06, 2020 11:29 am
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soundofmind says...



Thanks for the update!! U GUYS CAN DO DIS
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Sun Sep 06, 2020 7:23 pm
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Mageheart says...



Update x2: We did it!

@Oxara and I just finished collaborating on a post. Writing Oz and Lode interacting was a blast, and I can't wait for you all to see it when Ox is finished revising it!
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Update x3

I have finished revising it and it is posted!I hope you all enjoy it. It was a freaking blast to colab with mage and beat up... I mean explore lode's character with Oz. I look forward to the next post and to collaborating with all of you again (or even if it is the first time)
  





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This is an aside, and I have no idea what @soundofmind has idea for the escape, but as me and mage was collaborating we hint on a potential way to escape, which is for the gang to (somehow) delay Oz's shape-shifting-stopping volts things enough for him to shape shift into a guard, when the guards find him (as a guard) he goes "oh no Oz has escaped" as the guards release Oz (as a guard) and Oz does his thing to get everyone out with the other guard. Just an idea
  





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Mon Sep 07, 2020 12:40 am
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Ohhh that could be a fun thing to explore Ox!

Also I just finished the post and IM DYING AT THE LAST LINE LOL

Lode: so what are u in for
Oxara: (casually) almost destroying society
ASDHGLFDHlhflk

IT WAS A FUN POST U GUYS

LOOKS LIKE NEXT IS WOLFIE AGAIN W/GENA

5. Gena has an awkward interaction in one of the break rooms with her coworkers that reveals that she doesn't truly feel like one of the guards and still feels tied to her criminal past. Maybe they pry about her new assignment and say some not-nice things. (Could happen either via lowkey bullying or just not being able to relate to what the guards are commisserating about regarding prisoners and complaints). Doesnt have to be a super long post! @Wolfical (Gena's POV)
Hopefully this is cool w/you! If you have any ideas/questions/things you wanna include in addition lemme knowwww
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:33 pm
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I can't wait to see what you come up with, @Wolfical! :)

And I'm glad you liked our post, @soundofmind! Lode and Oz have a seriously entertaining dynamic, and I can't wait for the two of them to have more interactions in future posts. <3
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Wed Sep 09, 2020 3:01 am
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OH YES! I feel like Oz and Lode have great potential and I can't wait to see how their friendship evolves

ALSO JUST REALIZING - this is probably going to be Oz's first friend they've made since they were imprisoned D:
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I was joking with Ox in the pad that Oz would be like the go-between friend for Lode and Corden, since I'm not entirely sure Lode's going to get along with him. :P

Since Corden is on good terms with Oz, and Lode is friendly with Oz, I definitely think Lode is going to be friendly towards Corden just for that friendship - and will totally brag that he was friends first. :P
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Sun Sep 13, 2020 2:47 pm
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Pheligian Falcon: Prison Break
@Omnom @Oxara @Magebird @Wolfical

The Challenge: One point if you collaborate with one person on your post! One point for a minimum of 800 words! And one point for telling us what your character thinks of their new cellmate and their new acquaintances in their cell block.
Completion Time: 1 month
Credits Awarded: Possibility of 3 points!

Soundobooks challenge expiration #2!
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Wed Sep 16, 2020 2:58 am
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Looks like it's time for me to make another uhhh >_> CHALLENGE or smthn unless someone else wants to make a challenge ohuhu because that's ALSO a thing

@wolfical HOW GOES THE POST??

ALSO!! OWO?? UWU howis ya'll lov u ,,
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Yesss a challenge pls C:

It's goin!! Should be done this week!
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YAYAYAYYY

AND I wILL GET ON THAT!!!

EDIT: THE CHALLENGE IS UP BOIIISS
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Tue Oct 06, 2020 10:11 am
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Mageheart says...



Your post looks great, @Wolfical! I love getting to see more of the guards from another guard's perspective, as well as the interactions with a way-too-honest android.

Plus, her thoughts on Lode definitely made me smile. :)
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Tue Oct 06, 2020 10:14 am
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Yay! Thank you so much, Mage <33
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
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Tue Oct 06, 2020 10:42 am
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OMG WOLFICAL I LOVED YOUR POST,, wow the tension and build-up was lovely and I LOVE NETYI the android wow, i hope their empathy programming kicks in more because m ,,, maYBE ... FRIENDS????? :pleading emoji:

ALSO LEt's see what i have planned next hmm

6. Corden gets a few more liberties than the rest of the prisoners and tries to talk with their guard about getting a cell of his own, or getting moved back to his last cell block. They get to talking about the others (Kaz, Lode, Oz) and Corden maybe gets more info on them that me might not find out otherwise. (The goal here would be for both guard and Corden to grow more in trust w/each other but also maybe more in empathy/understanding for the others so they have more motive to help in an escape plan, even if it's just a small step in that direction). @Omnom (Corden's POV) and collabed w/@Wolfical (or with consulting Wolfie lol)


OMNOM I know u just finished a massive AH post so no rush to get to this right away but let me know when you think you might be able to get to it!! And if u need help or have diff ideas !!!! I lov ur ideas... amazing wonderufl spectacular

ANWAYS another great post :,) what a nice thing to end my day with
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