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Sat Sep 16, 2017 12:44 pm
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Sheyren says...



Here we can discuss characters, plots, and ideas. You bet we'll do a heck-ton of discussion. If you have any questions, especially regarding the previous installment, just ask. :)
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:02 pm
Jaybird says...



I'd like to claim a spot as one of the kingdom's Pyromancers!
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Got it!
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:08 pm
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Steggy says...



Interesting storybook so I'll be happy to claim one of the Terramancers, please? c:
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:23 pm
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Featherstone says...



*rolls in as a necromancer*

Can't break my dark streak, now can I?
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."

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Both of you are welcome!

As a side note, from now on, there won't be any more Necromancers, since they're so rare.
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:56 pm
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PrincessInk says...



This looks interesting so I would like a caelimancer, please? :)
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Hmmm....I will still reprise my role as Nal'tor. But...let me think. I have to think of a new character to place in here. If it weren't for the age limit I might have considered bringing in my ice mage, Torrin. But he is generally a Dragon in disguise. If you have an issue with that I will think of something different.
  





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Sat Sep 16, 2017 3:14 pm
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@PrincessInk Awesome! Welcome aboard!

@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX Of course roles from the first one are reprised! As for the dragon in disguise concept, I'm going to say no on that, for reasons I can't tell you. Sorry about that. :/
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Lael says...



I'll give this a try! I don't know what kind of magic I'm going to do yet. But I do have a question: Desert-Dwellers' magic is sand, and only sand, right?
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 4:17 pm
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That is mostly correct. They actually manipulate air to move the sand, so they aren't really special. But they have religious reasons as to why they only move sand, and if you go with a Desert-Dweller, I'll let you flesh that out.
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Lael says...



Yeah, I don't really think I'm interested in a Desert-Dweller, but that's nice to know. I think I'll go with a Lianth, a more bird-like one if that's fine.
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That works!
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 5:44 pm
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Lumi says...



Gonna actually roll an Aquamancer from the desert region.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 5:48 pm
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That's an interesting and neat idea. :)
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