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The Skyriders of R'lyr DT



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Thu Jun 08, 2017 6:43 pm
ChieTheWriter says...



So it's Faction vs Skyriders?
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Thu Jun 08, 2017 7:22 pm
Feltrix says...



Options that I see: They want control, and to overthrow the government. They want the government to have totalitarian control, and we have to rebel against them. Maybe they are raiding villages, etc because they're greedy and they can. Maybe they think that whatever country we're in should expand it's borders, and so they want to start a war with another country. Maybe they think that the animals they ride deserve more respect and their own country, so they decide to conquer places in the name of their mounts. My well of ideas is beginning to run dry, but if I get any more ideas, I'll say.
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Thu Jun 08, 2017 7:29 pm
Featherstone says...



Stop asking me, start figuring things out amongst each other too, you guys. This is an SB, not a D&D game. Collaborate.

Anyways, I think either option 1 seems to make the most sense, but I feel like it lacks depth. What if there's a dark side to the R'lyr government we don't know about and they rebelled because of that? That adds in some gray area.
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Thu Jun 08, 2017 9:35 pm
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K so my character suddenly ended up being older than all y'alls...

But he's only in his 30s what's with all the kids.
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Thu Jun 08, 2017 10:07 pm
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Children have the most room for character development!
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Fri Jun 09, 2017 12:03 am
Featherstone says...



Chie, my dude is like 26.
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:26 am
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@ChieRynn this is an odd request, but um...would you mind deleting Nysn and re-submitting him? It's just bothering me that the two dudes you made are separate and all the rest are together in the list...

Is totally not at all OCD (but I'm better than I used to be, so there)
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:35 am
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alright.
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:48 am
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Thank you!
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 2:12 am
sheysse says...



There's a difference between OCD and desiring uniformity... This is coming from someone who has to count all his steps in musical four four time.

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Sat Jun 10, 2017 2:15 am
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...I thought everybody did that when listening to music.
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 2:18 am
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They do. But this is constantly. Even without music. And if I exit a room with 3/4 steps, then I have to go back inside the room and leave again, fulfilling the steps.
  





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Sat Jun 10, 2017 2:24 am
Featherstone says...



Ah.

I used to do things like that but as I've gotten older I've grown out of a lot of it.
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 3:22 am
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@Sheyren we need the cat bit of Katako, but other than that, it's good to go.

So, there's a rogue faction. I'll write the first post tomorrow as Aquila.
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Sat Jun 10, 2017 10:22 am
sheysse says...



All gryphons have the body of a cat, so I thought it was implied.
  








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