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The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]



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Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:32 am
Featherstone says...



Not necessarily if it is a high-level monster, and stealing a soul is very different than simply killing. It is stealing a soul.
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:34 am
sheysse says...



I interpreted it as the bone sword doesn't actually inflict physical damage. It only has any effect if it reaps your soul.
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:34 am
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That works, too. You want me to make it that?
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The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Jan 18, 2017 1:15 am
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Done! I'll add history once I've mulled it over a bit longer. What is the answer about the time period question?
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Jan 18, 2017 1:18 am
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Okie dokey, thanks!
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The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Wed Jan 18, 2017 11:52 am
sheysse says...



Hey, I made a Writer Feed Pad for this SB, to discuss plot and stuff. I'll update it later, but I figure I'll link it now.

http://sheyren.writerfeedpad.com/1
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2017 9:08 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I think you didn't make it public. I can't sign in to see it.
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:03 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Yes it does.
  





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Fri Jan 20, 2017 7:49 pm
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sheysse says...



And so it begins! The post is up, and it sets the scene for the future. Of anyone wants to go now, feel free. I won't be doing any specific order, so it's a free for all.

Also, as a side note, I will be writing in First Person for every other post.
  





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Fri Jan 20, 2017 8:15 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



@Sheyren

I'm sorry...there is only one way to introduce this particular character into any SB.


I'm sorry.
  








For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
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