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The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]



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Tue Mar 14, 2017 4:20 pm
Featherstone says...



Yeah, that pretty much sums it up XD
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Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Tue Mar 14, 2017 4:25 pm
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Woops, I spilled some Chemical Tension in the viewing gallery. I'll get to cleaning that up right away.
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Tue Mar 14, 2017 4:55 pm
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Mageheart says...



@Lumi, your post went on the third page of this storybook! ^_^
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Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:58 pm
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Feltrix says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX I love the Karate Kid thing happening in your out recent post. For future reference, you briefly narrated as Ker for a sentence or so. I'm fine with that and would never call it overstepping, but I felt like it was just a little awkward.
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Tue Mar 14, 2017 10:20 pm
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sheysse says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX I loved that post! It was funny, and you brought up the magic categories that I thought of but never mentioned before. I don't think you overstepped Sylvetta.
  





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Wed Mar 15, 2017 3:25 pm
RippleGylf says...



Apologies for taking so long forming my character. How exactly will she fit in to the group as a whole, so I can better develop her background?
"Eternity, I hear you calling, but you will not have me yet."
  





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Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:33 pm
sheysse says...



Your character will be another magician who will join the group. They'll beg Sylvetta to let them accompany the group, and their reason will make Sylvetta say yes. An example of what I was thinking was this character wants to help kill the Wyverns to make a name for his family, giving his children a future.

Just remember, they're gonna die solely for character development for everyone else, so make them a likeable character.
  





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Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:16 pm
Feltrix says...



@Lumi, sorry this is late. Can you link me to the place where I claim my storybook challenge points? Is it too late?
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Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:21 pm
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Storybook Badges & Challenges

Claim them there and say that I said it was done in time before the challenge expired. :)

Speaking of, @Sheyren, we need a new one!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:56 am
sheysse says...



I'll be making a challenge soon, probably tonight.
  





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Sat Mar 18, 2017 7:47 pm
Mageheart says...



what if your character is a loner

I have an idea for my post, but I was really worried for a second!
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Tue Mar 21, 2017 11:49 pm
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I just posted to get us back in action. After this attack, the group will be embarking on the journey to slay the Wyverns once and for all. I can't wait, because this is essentially what I've been looking forward to about this Storybook!
  





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Wed Mar 22, 2017 12:15 am
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Well played with that surreptitious "Goodbye, peace," @Sheyren. I didn't think of using that to complete the challenge. I had to come up with an entire scene revolving around it. Also, sorry for interrupting your "The wyverns are coming, the wyverns are coming!" scene, but I'm sure you won't mind. Thirdly, impressive use of two ys in a row in the name of what's-his-face-Kyoah-replacement.
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