Okay, so I tried to include everyone but I'm not sure if their actions are in character. If you want them to do something different, tell me and I'll change it. But you can write out a more complex account of what happened to your characters in your own posts. What do you guys think about the overall scene though? Should I change it?
I bought acactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert. -Demetri Martin
I'll try to get a post in for Esher. Lemme know what you want me to have her go back to the school or something ^^
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
Alright, I'll have her take her horse (he's an American Saddler, so he's gonna be majestic haha) out toward the ... wilderness, and she'll run into Matthew.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
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