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Fri Dec 02, 2016 6:53 pm
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HazelGrace16 says...



It'll be up tonight! I just had to do some editing, and put in some additional things Zues and I added after he read the rough draft.
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 5:28 am
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Posted! Sorry it took so long! If I need to make any changes or anything feel free to let me know. The busy holiday season and writers block have not been kind to me, and I hope this is a good way to start this adventure :)
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 6:19 am
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ScarlettFire says...



@HazelGrace16 argh, present tense! *shudders* Looks good, though.

@Auxiira, how goes that profile?
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 1:10 pm
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crossroads says...



Would the servants have attended the funeral?
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 1:34 pm
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LordZeus says...



@ChildOfNowhere I think so. I am rather busy right now, but I should be able to post within the next 2-3 days. Sorry for any inconvenience.
  





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Sat Dec 03, 2016 1:37 pm
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Casanova says...



Oh, it's up! Woo!
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 9:14 pm
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HazelGrace16 says...



I thought yours was in present tense as well??? @ScarlettFire
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 11:19 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



@HazelGrace16 nope! Past tense, third person. XD
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 4:45 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Gah! I can change it if I need to!
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 4:47 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Past tense might be easier for people to read? (It's definitely easier for me. Present tense does my head in, and not in a good way lol)

Guys; past or present? Which do you prefer? (Purely for curiousity's sake).
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 4:51 am
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I am fine with either, though I don't perfectly do either of them. As long as it stays third person I am good.
  





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crossroads says...



I prefer reading past. It's very rare for me to not get pulled out of the story every few seconds if it's written in present tense.

But when it comes to writing, I'm adaptable, with tenses as much as with persons. Third person past tense is how I'll be writing my posts here, but if we decided to switch for some reason, it'd take me like a few sentences to get used to it and then I'd be fine with whatever *shrug*
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 6:03 am
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Casanova says...



I prefer present tense usually, but either is fine with me
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Sun Dec 04, 2016 6:21 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



For me, past tense is much easier to follow.
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