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Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:41 pm
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RippleGylf says...



Fire looks cool. :D As far as combat goes, would melee with a spear work?
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Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:45 pm
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Yep! For more flavor with that, you'll likely want heavy armor and musculature (male OR female) since lancing takes a tremendous amount of strength and agility to dish out and not take in.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:20 pm
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... I just realized that we already have a lancer... derp. Never mind, then.

What about just wielding a lightweight metal staff? I'm imagining an inexperienced young adult, slight of frame. Would that work?
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Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:24 pm
Lumi says...



Oh, no. By lancer on the front page, it means sidekick. It's a trope. Lancer the class is different and totally welcome!

But both of your suggestions are welcome. c: Really, I'm open to anything. What kind of magic are you leaning towards?
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 9:56 am
RippleGylf says...



Leaning towards Fire magic. :D
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 11:31 am
sheysse says...



Question - Now, I haven't read all the posts yet, so I apologize if its already covered, but what is Zoey's type of magic?
  





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Tue Feb 07, 2017 12:30 pm
Lumi says...



Fairy!

And fire sound great, Ripple!
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Tue Feb 07, 2017 1:42 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@RippleGylf, your character would make for a good sixth ranger from what I've seen thus far. It sounds like s/he would use a combination of Valon's and Tynan's styles.
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Thu Feb 09, 2017 11:20 pm
sheysse says...



Update - I just got to chapter 1G (sorry, I'm reading slowly). Will hopefully be finished by this weekend.
  





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Fri Feb 10, 2017 5:45 am
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Before you read the second part of this message, know that there'll be no immediate pressure to finish reading the long backlog or finish creating a character that hasn't joined yet. DISCLAIMER OVER.

I'm going to begin writing for Chapter 2: Home tomorrow. This comes with some patch notes that I think everyone will find relieving and helpful.

Mana Notes 2Ai


1. Leveling and experience have been done away with.

2. Spell parameters, histories, knowledge, and factors have been removed.

3. Gold is now only an in-story concept.

4. The nation of Howlengale and the Silverlake Lowlands have been unlocked.

5. Exposure to the harsh elements and wild aether will awaken primal energy in our heroes, allowing for a slight increase in magic.

6. Posts should no longer exceed 1000 words in length to ease the psychological daunt of creating an entry.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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-Shinji Moon


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Fri Feb 10, 2017 10:58 pm
Lumi says...



we're trying to cut back!

it's a bit like shaking an old habit...you have to take baby steps.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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-Shinji Moon


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Fri Feb 10, 2017 11:20 pm
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OH! @RippleGylf! We really liked the sound of a Dragoon (which is what a polearm/lance wielder is in fantasy terms) -- so if you're cool with it, you can be the dragoon who meets us at the border to the next country we're headed to.

There's still plenty of real-life time between now and then, though. I don't think I said this, but uh.

How do I usually put this? <pondering emoji>

My storybooks are slow-burning flames. As long as the people who say they'll tend to it tend to it, it'll burn to completion; it just takes years. In the last completed SB's case, 2 years and some change. And now it's turned into a personal novel project for me and my best friend!

So the basic message here is not to feel stressed! xD

After all, the section of the site is called /rpg ;D
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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-Shinji Moon


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Fri Feb 10, 2017 11:41 pm
sheysse says...



I didn't necessarily mean to cut back, just saying it was a fact. The posts were good too, so don't change anything.
  





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Fri Feb 10, 2017 11:50 pm
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Oh no, that was something we'd decided before. Like the concept of writing a boss fight with character development and resolution and everything was daunting, so we're trying to roll with posts under 1000 words to keep things relaxed and remember that an entire scene doesn't need to be one post. Sort of a return to how storybookery used to beeeeeeee and how I've rarely done it, admittedly.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  








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