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Fri Jun 24, 2016 1:25 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I plan on holding off my post until the other characters catch up. Mingan would stay at home until the celebration and likely everything will work out there.
  





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Fri Jun 24, 2016 1:38 pm
ChieTheWriter says...



Ok, so I think my next post will be when Jake sees the Jacksons ride into town. He knows they're there for the guns, so he'll be watching so nothing crazy happens. There might be a little gun-pointing, but nothing besides that.
"Nobody has an easy time in this world. Either you climb out of the muck and become a human being, or you die." - Josh Randall, Wanted: Dead or Alive
  





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Fri Jun 24, 2016 5:26 pm
Vellichor says...



@HazelGrace16 No need for apologies :D I'm sure everyone had just as much fun as I in reading your post :)
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Sat Jun 25, 2016 3:03 am
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Alright. I changed my post so that it doesn't go to that night. But I added an interaction with the local gunsmith. Hope everyone likes it.
  





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Sat Jun 25, 2016 5:23 am
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@Wolfical I wish I could write as you do xD That immersion is worth some jealousy!
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Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:04 am
Wolfi says...



Aw shucks! Thank you! <3

For writing western stuff, I love using this site for authentic language. :3
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 3:36 pm
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*nudge
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 3:43 pm
ChieTheWriter says...



I'll go. I'll be in by tomorrow. So sorry, I completely forgot. XD
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 3:44 pm
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:D
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Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:42 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



It's alright. I'm mostly waiting for the rifle to finish being worked on and night to fall.
  





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Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:38 am
Vellichor says...



ACK. I didn't realize that I was supposed to write any more about the rifle. If you want, you can go ahead and write whatever interaction between those two that you please as I don't believe I'll have time in the next couple of days... :(
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Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:06 pm
ChieTheWriter says...



Umm...so I ran into an issue. I won't be as active (not just on YWS, but on my laptop as well) So I might not get my post in...on time. If someone wants to use Jake they can, and it might be better for the storybook to "NPC" him until I can get back. I'm so sorry guys, I fell like I'm letting y'all down... :(
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Sat Jul 02, 2016 4:16 am
Vellichor says...



@AnnGrace No worries! I'm just sorry you're having issues :( Good luck on fixing whatever has gone wrong!
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Thu Jul 07, 2016 5:56 am
Wolfi says...



Awesome post, @Gravity!
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Jul 07, 2016 1:24 pm
Gravity says...



Thank you!! @wolfical
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

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