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Wed May 04, 2016 4:41 pm
Vellichor says...



@Gravity Gotcha :D Thanks again for letting me in in the first place!
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Thu May 05, 2016 12:17 am
NicoleBri says...



Thank you @mcleo1 I hope that gives you something to write off of. I hope it wasn't TOOOOO short haha
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Thu May 05, 2016 2:30 pm
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I created a spoiler that shows you the layout of the rooms. I'm not sure if the photo can be seen because all the photos on YWS that aren't profile photos are blocked, so let me know if there's a glitch.

Yes, I went a bit unrealistic with how it's all laid out, but I didn't think having nice rooms and bathrooms would affect the plot of the storybook
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Thu May 05, 2016 3:01 pm
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@mcleo1

Cora will be moving out of their room soon. I'll try to mention it in my next post?
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Thu May 05, 2016 3:53 pm
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Thu May 05, 2016 4:59 pm
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@Rydia I well fix it when I get home from school this afternoon
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Thu May 05, 2016 5:16 pm
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@QueenOfHearts
Alright, goodluck.
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@Gravity
Will Jo be rooming with me then late? I don't think she has a room mate.And since Cora will be leaving Briony soon..
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Thu May 05, 2016 6:38 pm
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@mcleo1 that is totally up to you guys but I think that could be a great way for both characters to have more interaction.
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Fri May 06, 2016 2:01 am
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@ChildOfWriting
My character Briony is about to be Roommateless so what do you say about her and Jo being roomies soon?
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Fri May 06, 2016 5:36 am
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@mcleo1 Yes yes yes and yes! I was worried about finding a roomie for Jo so that would be awesome!
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Fri May 06, 2016 5:41 am
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So I made a verryyy slight revision to Jo's appearance just in case anyone wanted to give it a look-see :) Nothing super important, just another distinguishing look.
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Fri May 06, 2016 12:30 pm
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@mcleo1 I loved your post :) it was cute!
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Fri May 06, 2016 3:16 pm
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@NicoleBri
Thanks, it felt kind of short but I felt like I needed to put something.
And @ChildOfWriting Great, I can't wait for them to be roomies. I'm not sure when it'll happen though for the moment I'd assume she's either with an NPC or no one for the moment. But hopefully it'll happen soon enough
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Fri May 06, 2016 7:03 pm
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Hey guys. Can someone please include Lucifer and Trixie? Feeling a little left out here.
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Gravity says...



WAKE UPPPPPPP

Okay, so I posted for Aaron @QueenofHearts and wanted to mention that Aaron and Cora are just gonna be friends (to everybody else, this is stuff you need to know). So you guys should also focus on developing platonic relationships as well as romantic ones.
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  








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