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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:11 am
HazelGrace16 says...



Posted!
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:34 am
Europa says...



I actually did play never too late while reading that last part. It's on my spotify.

(And on my Crow playlist on my spotify. :D)
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:41 am
Europa says...



Crow seemed awfully chatty today...
normally when strangers talk to him he never says more than three words in the same sentence.

Of course you can never tell with a guy like that, maybe he was trying to gain her trust.
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:44 am
HazelGrace16 says...



The reason I did that was because I thought it would be interesting if Crow actually met Cassia during her kidnapping, and they somewhat become Stockholm syndromey friends. But something happened and she lost all her memory of him. Most likely the technology of the rebels perhaps?
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:46 am
Europa says...



OOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!

*Makes major edits to post*

Heheheheh....um yeah...Toatally what I was thinking too.

*Furously deletes half of post.*
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:48 am
HazelGrace16 says...



Haha
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Sat Nov 21, 2015 3:01 am
Europa says...



Posted! @Gravity, this doesn't have to be the whole conversation, I left a little wiggle room for you in case you wanted to continue, but if you want to part ways with him there that works too.
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 3:19 am
Gravity says...



@TheFantasy14 I don't see anything...
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 3:42 pm
Europa says...



@Gravity fixed it. For some reason it didn't post but it's up now.
  





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Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:07 pm
Europa says...



Uh-oh...did I scare everyone off...? :) ;) :b
  





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Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:24 pm
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no, going to dinner with dad and then gonna try to post
And the heart is hard to translate
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And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:42 pm
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I'm not dead, I swear! We're all still here, @TheFantasy14.
  





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Wed Nov 25, 2015 12:38 am
TheForgottenKing says...



Perty please no one post, I'm working on my post, and I'm usually doing it thru my non internet connected laptop, so I won't know if anyone posts and than I'd have to rewrite it.
"I make my own luck"- Shay Patrick Cormac
  





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Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:31 am
Chaser says...



Nice post. I'll take a post, if only to fill in some character development blanks.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
  





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Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:55 am
Chaser says...



Random question, but can our school nurse be a huge muscle man doctor?
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
  








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