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The Maze of the Guilds DT



Choose Zyreli's fate

1) Through magic or steel, Zyreli's quest will when he draws his final breath in battle.
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23%
2) Let Zyreli meet his end unaware as he foolishly dies by the hands of a trap in one of the Towers.
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8%
3) A fate truly worse than death- enslavement. Zyreli was too weak to withstand the stronger forces of those who guard the Pages, and will spend a lifestyle in servitude of them, until age or starvation claims his life.
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69%
 
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 12:04 am
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reserve me for the command tower
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:17 am
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call me the flash sonny, i'm ZOOMING through these trials.

but also Frost is going to starve to death the next trial unless I buy units, so I can I buy units please?
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:41 am
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@AstralHunter, I noticed that mistake yes... The amount is 30.\

@Poopsie, how many units do you wish to purchase? (note, if you want to buy moderate or [/i]ample[/i] supplies, please purchase a knapsack too...)
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:57 am
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@Poopsie, here are Frost's points for Trial 2-

First to Complete the Trial: 230 points
Completion of Trial: 75 points
Completion of Bonus Point: 30 points
Word Count to point tally: 217 points
*Total points awarded: 552 points

Frost's netto amount: 1117 points
Frost's remaining consumables: -1, please purchase more before you gain a penalty!

Also, please capitalize the start of some of your shorter paragraphs and the dialogue parts' starts... Thanks!
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 6:12 am
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@15253... Wow! Quite a remarkable post indeed! The way you described how Nero feels the Maze's memories, that excellent battle with the Scribe... That was most entertaining indeed.

Unfortunately, I may not grant you points for the Trial post, since Trial 2 has officially started today (blame your brother :P )

But still, quite a post that!
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 3:52 pm
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Meh. I'll manage
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 8:40 am
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Posted! Once again, I apologize for the length. Please tell me if I need to change anything.
  





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Thu Feb 04, 2016 10:45 am
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Thanks @Jhinx! Let's make sure we stay up there guys!!
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 10:50 am
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Oh, please note (I just saw it with Severan's post now)- you are no longer at the Gates, so please say X sector from now on (X being the name of that sector, like Snow, Coral, etc) Also, I shall be saying to which sectors you'll all have proceeded to as soon as I finish my various algorithms to do so :P (I don't really have algorithms... I just roll a D100, but it's my way of saying to be prepared for a new sector ;-) )

Also, the last time the Maze woke was a century ago, with only one person coming out (one of the current GLs)... No one outside of the Maze knows what happens inside, and those who survive make a magical oath to never reveal what happened inside (or face the consequences)
I won't bug you about it (since I don't recall mentioning this to you guys here before), but please bare that in mind next any of you write about the Maze (thus, people might still remember Tallius Terek after a 100 years somehow, but no one knows what happened to him, since he didn't survive... For all they know he got eaten by a carnivorous potato :P )
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 11:15 am
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I quite enjoyed that post @LordZeus... Here are Severan's points after Trial 2:

-Second to Complete the Trial: 220 points
-Completion of the Trial: 75 points
-Completion of the Bonus Point: 30 points
-Word Count to Point Tally: 250 points
*Total amount awarded: 575 points

Severan's netto amount: 1120 points
Severan's remaining consumables: 0, restock required

Congratulations! By 3 points Shade is in the lead now! Also, you may go claim you 5 SB credits in the SB Challenges forum.
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:30 pm
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XD darn you zeus!
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:47 pm
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@TheIllusiveIntellect do I need to restock on supplies now, or can I wait till after the next trial? @Poopsie boo yah! (no offense bro)
  





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Thu Feb 04, 2016 6:10 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I meant to ask this yesterday already, but apparently, I fell asleep while typing the message. >_>

Anyway, may Lysander and Aquanette please swap places? After considering it again, I realised sending them to the appropriate towers was what I should have done in the first place, since Aquanette is a large being and can only benefit from this fact if the temporary followers become cheaper.

@LordZeus, it seems @TheIllusiveIntellect and I are not on the same page concerning the supplies. I thought that our characters had to eat during the Second Trial or suffer a penalty, but TII implies you can go one Trial without eating before you are penalised. My rationale is that a character must consume supplies each Trial, otherwise they are spending less points than they should, but if the creator differs, I must defer to him. Either way, you're safe for now.
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 6:48 pm
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@AstralHunter, I made it that they can reach -1 supplies for the sake of the larger Champions. If they, for example were at 0 supplies, they'd automatically have received a double penalty if they didn't buy again (and that would be overkill if they already have to purchase more food than the others and pay larger penalties).
Now, they'll receive a penalty if they reach -2, but not a double penalty.

Thus, Frost is at the brink now, and has to purchase supplies before the next Trial.

I hope this made more sense now ;-)
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