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Sat Dec 19, 2015 9:40 pm
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Europa says...



Posted. *Hopes romance scene isn't too crappy*
  





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Well let me explain my list. It's over the time period of however long it takes you guys to get back together. I'm going to be in Alaska for Christmas and most of winter break, so I'll have limited if any internet connection at all.

So EAGLE is made up, and I suppose you guys will eventually discover the name through your own characters at your own pace. Consider Matt the winter soldier. He's being brain washed basically, so he's now becoming a fueled agent for EAGLE. In your post he can be merely mentioned as a mysterious figure that seems to follow you guys or when you feel like you're being watched, it's really him. It'll be a heart breaking scene when Matt and the Heroes reunite, but he doesn't recognize them anymore. He's usually by Dr. Jahid's side unless he's on a mission. it's up to you guys to figure out away to bring him back!! And by that time he'll be fully in control of Ying's powers. So yep. I love you guys and this is so much fun and I look forward to returning with a new post when I can!!
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Sun Dec 20, 2015 5:53 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Heartbreaking! @TheForgottenKing I cant wait to see where that goes.

Also I posted. Its short but its her perspective. Nothing too spectacular. :)
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Mon Dec 21, 2015 4:14 pm
Europa says...



Lau2001 wrote:

“Oh shit” I muttered.



Ehrghm. Err...Lau? Maybe censor this please?
otherwise, it's a great post. the bit where he's talking to himself is kinda cute.

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 7:15 pm
Snoops says...



Oh sorry. completely forgot. I changed it to fudge cakes.
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Mon Dec 21, 2015 7:19 pm
Europa says...



Thanks. :)

An-y-way...should probably do Leon's POV on all of this.

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Mon Dec 21, 2015 8:29 pm
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Posted!
  





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Tue Dec 22, 2015 9:48 pm
Snoops says...



If no one else wants to post, I can write about Carlos waking up in the lab? Could have it up tonight.
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Tue Dec 22, 2015 10:51 pm
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@lau2001

If you could, mention hearing someone screaming who sounds like Matt ;)
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Tue Dec 22, 2015 11:20 pm
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Posting now!
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Wed Dec 23, 2015 7:42 pm
Chaser says...



And my ego takes the 100th post.
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Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:24 pm
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I have been inspired. I'm doing a post from Blak's Point of View.

This should be fun.
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2015 11:31 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Question. Could the scientists be in the process of creating a krytonite type of substance for the heroes? Its not that strong or permanent, but in large doses it can stop powers for a good few hours. Im only asking because it would play into the trapping of Leon, and Scar.
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Thu Dec 24, 2015 3:01 am
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Sounds like a good plot element. What would it be, though?

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Thu Dec 24, 2015 3:30 am
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Just a constructed serum I guess
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