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Mon May 11, 2015 2:42 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Buggiedude2340 Yeah, he'll be fine with her company. He doesn't loath companions anyway. No, his lone-wolf status won't be too affected, especially since he still fights one his own.
Yes, he does have his own ship.
...Oh you just gave me a great idea :D I planned for him to have a small flagship by default, but I think that him and Ink will have to work together to find a bigger ship, as Andarr lacks the space to keep both her and himself comfortable. Oh, this is going to be a fun adventure :)

EDIT: I am double-posting for the sake of attracting attention.

'Kay so that was BY FAR the shortest post I ever posted in an SB. Beware, y'all, 'cause that won't last. Hope you enjoyed it!

@Buggiedude2340 the ball's on your side! Andarr's Zorreol can totally approach Ink's home and she'd have the time to stick herself on it as it passes. No big ship yet, but that'll happen later. I'm workin' on it.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon May 11, 2015 9:02 pm
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(This post is now useless and can now be ignored or eventually deleted, as I can't seem to be able to delete it myself anymore.)
Last edited by TinkerTwaggy on Mon May 11, 2015 10:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon May 11, 2015 9:15 pm
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@Tortwag if you want to keep the SB where it can be seen by more people, I could post my next post, rather than you breaking the no double-posting rule.
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Mon May 11, 2015 10:08 pm
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@JKHatt Uhh... No it was just a reccuring thing... Argh, never mind that then. My fault. Lemme edit that up there.

EDIT: So the delete button has disappeared. Can't delete that post.
...Huh. Well I'll just be sure to edit everything FIRST next time. Bummer.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon May 11, 2015 10:20 pm
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@JKHatt, I will be posting tonight c:
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Tue May 12, 2015 3:11 am
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Ah, @Tortwag, please notify me if I got Andarr's personality wrong. I can easily change the dialogue to fit.
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They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
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Tue May 12, 2015 5:30 am
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@Buggiedude2340 I'd say you portrayed him pretty well! I don't really have anything wrong to say about this, really. I think I'll just go with this. Next post's gonna be fun.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Tue May 12, 2015 6:31 am
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Still waiting on @Kanome, but I suppose we can all start posting more.
Partly because her post should be up soon, and partly because I just finished my second post.
It's a bit strange because I didn't explain how Myrlin got off his planet (I'll explain that later I guess... XD) and apparently he really likes burgers.
They also make him act a bit drunk. Burger-drunk.
*mutters to self* Namesake's the greatest wizard of all time and he gets "drunk" on burgers...

EDIT: Also, "charcoals" would seem to be a Brymian curse word :? XD
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Tue May 12, 2015 8:43 am
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@JKHatt Well that was an eventful robbery :O Too bad he's technically a criminal, now.
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Tue May 12, 2015 9:25 am
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Dude, is there no police to catch you for that robbery? XD
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Tue May 12, 2015 6:56 pm
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I mean, he literally just took it. The galactic police will be after him soon, and for quite a while to come I imagine.
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Tue May 12, 2015 7:28 pm
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I shall write Martha's part when I finally have internet and there might be cliffhangers..
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Tue May 12, 2015 7:33 pm
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I feel like most of my SB posts end in cliffhangers, or at least I try to make them end as such. That way I have to write more.
If I just end a post on a non-cliffhanger or an ending that doesn't feel like a cliffhanger then it's kind of like a story has ended. But if it's a cliffhanger (or feels like one) then the story still needs to be explained.

This was a lot longer than I expected...
Basically, yay cliffhangers! :P
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Tue May 12, 2015 9:39 pm
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@JKHatt Isn't that a good thing that you end your stuff in cliffhangers? I mean, I find it pretty good. I don't know many who don't like cliffhangers :D
And yeah, the galactic police is probably comin' his way in a few hours. He'll have like a wanted poster or something.

...Haha, y'know what would be awesome? If Andarr and Ink came across the poster and chased Myrlin down for the bounty. I'm SO bent on doin' that now, this could be fun XD
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Tue May 12, 2015 9:45 pm
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@Tortwag, yeah, I was trying to explain that it was good. That might not have come off in the way I wanted... XD

The galactic police will definitely catch up to him, but I also have to figure out where the hyper drive will take him.
Hopefully Ink and Andarr don't kill Myrlin. I'm growing a little fond of him :p
Though, if there's wanted posters around wherever Andarr and Ink next land (or whatever) then this galaxy really doesn't like ship thieves. 'Cause, I mean, it was just one ship and his first recorded felony, so I don't think there would be a widespread printing of such posters.

Am I explaining that right? XD
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