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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:38 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Very well. I have just the solution!!
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TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:39 pm
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TheCrimsonLady says...



I'm just going to go spend the night downloading music, then.
And I look forward to seeing your character profiles, mes bon amis.
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:44 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



Just so people know what sins count, here are the twelve circles:

Lying
Pride
Greed
Gluttony
Wrathful
Neglect
Adulterers
Thievery
Rape/Pedophiles
Murderers
Traitors
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:49 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I assume the order, from top to bottom, moves towards the centre. Am I wrong?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:49 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



To my most esteemed Queen of Darkness, I have edited Gus's sins for you. (I hope you like his dark secret...)
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:54 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



@AstralHunter, I think so, yes. Even though that would mean Gluttony is the ring of ice, as I believe the ninth ring is known as the ring of Ice. The ninth ring from the inside, if I'm not mistaken.
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:55 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



@AstralHunter @TheWanderingWizard

I purposefully did not give them to you in order. You must judge for yourself what the worst and best sins are :)


Ah, my royal wizard, I shall go look at that directly.

And make no mistake, Dante's Inferno does NOT relate to the circles.
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:56 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



That us an oxymoron "best sins". Ye don't get something like that ye know...
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:57 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



Shhh.

I'm the Queen of Darkness, I get to do whatever I want.
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:58 pm
BrumalHunter says...



Oh! That makes so much more sense, since I'd have expected Greed, Pride and Murder (and let's not forget Rape and Treachery) to be in the centre, or at least close to it.

PS: You two literally posted two comments while I was typing this one. -_-
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:01 pm
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



You're too slow, my amigo!! Can't catch this wizard, lily lizard. You can't... (Stop rhyming!!)
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


Proudly [They/Them]
  





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Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:04 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I just have to comment on this! Our signatures (@AstralHunter and mine) both are either a Bible scripture or a quote on kindness and love, yet we're busy in a SB about Hell. (Irony I tell you...)
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


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Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:23 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



You guys are blowing up my notifs xD (So disctracting I must admit).

But, it is said that they can come from any time period, correct? That even includes future from present day? (I won't include any weapons that are considered unfair, as my character will go into hell with only the glasses and clothing he wears.)
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:25 pm
BrumalHunter says...



Sometimes, in order to gain perspective on what "good" really means, you have to delve into what people would generally consider as "bad" - why is it that way, and what caused it to become that way?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:30 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



Yes, wolf, you can be from the future. Of course, if you seem to be too powerful, I will ask you to modify :).

Well said, Hunter.
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