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Mon Apr 27, 2015 11:34 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



15, to be honest, I don't have a real job for Morn >.< At this moment, the party is readying to set out in search of the diamon again, so perhaps you could have him notice that going on? (Xavier wanted Morn along, because he knew of his fighting ability.)
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Mon Apr 27, 2015 11:58 pm
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that's actually a good idea, I want some of that action X3. So should I just go ahead and notice you guys heading off for the diamond or do you wanna initiate the diamond mission thingy?
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:08 am
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In my last post, Xavier said two days, so to keep with the adventurer's timeline, there would still be preparations, but Morn can definitely ask around as the news spreads of the party.
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:56 am
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TheCrimsonLady says...



@AstralHunter

Perfect post.
I'll write Helle tonight (or should I say this morning?)
I think I'll let her follow him into the wee hours of the morn.

ALSO, now that I think about it, Helle is a shapeshifter. The idea that people can look different and be the same isn't that far off. So she might suspect (but she still wouldn't go in for the kill yet, since she doesn't want to accidentally kill an innocent.)

But she'd confront him. So... up for confrontation in a few (SB) days?
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 2:34 am
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@AstralHunter, wow! Once again, you impress me with your superior writing skills! I loved the "Success!" in your post :P

Both @Wolfare1 and I have a terrible exam approaching, one that is sucking up all my time, plus my entire next weekend is going to be dedicated to a chalk festival. So it seems like my next post won't be completed until after May 5th...
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 4:25 am
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@Wolfie36 and @Wolfare1, best of luck with your exams! @AstralHunter and I are only starting at the end of May, so...

@QueenAnne, I like the idea! Just note, @AstralHunter also has a little surprise lined up, so you can follow him (if Helle can find him), but please just hold back on the confrontation part (you'll see why after two @AstralHunter posts ;) :D So feel free to post, because after that he'll try and post, and then after my post he'll post his big SURPRISE!

@15253, go ahead with your post, but please remember my challenge.
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 5:13 am
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okai though I think I'll wait for the weekend though. Things to do! Places to be! Huzzah for nothing X3
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 9:44 pm
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TheCrimsonLady says...



@TheWanderingWizard

That's fine. I was thinking she'd confront him after they were out of the Obeservatory, so...
(And I think I may know what the surprise is, but I'm not sure.)
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 9:47 pm
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Tonight (probably late, like 1 AM, but meh) I'm 99% sure I'll get a post up from Aaron - and if you wouldn't mind, Wandering, another for Xavier the next day, perhaps. I plan on having Aaron's sort of long, so I want to separate the two.
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 4:04 am
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@QueenAnne, @AstralHunter said he discussed it with you, so you are probably thinking correctly. *shushes you in front of the others*

@Wolfare1, that is fine!! Double posting is classified as posting directly after each other with the same character, so having a Xavier post directly after a Aaron is allowed.
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 3:21 pm
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@QueenAnne, a confrontation would be most entertaining. Go right ahead.

@Wolfie36, thank you. :D And I feel your pain as if it were my own, for I too am struggling to be active. I'm behind not only in my mathematics, but in my biology too (and we're writing a test tomorrow), but I do well in both of those, so I can (sort of) afford it. Unfortunately, I do not have enough time to sneak in an SB post. :(
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Sun May 03, 2015 3:41 am
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I'd like to wait for Xavier's post seeing as he's starting a the whole expedition thing (I think) and Morn will tag along although If you want me to post now I will.
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SpiritedWolfe says...



If you want, you can go ahead and post. Aaron is my priority as of now, and even that will take some time for me (considering it is exam season.) I'm still not sure about timeline stuff, so they may not be leaving quite yet. I still think there is one more day.
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Sun May 03, 2015 4:17 pm
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TheCrimsonLady says...



Since I'm home today, I'll post.
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Wed May 06, 2015 12:31 am
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The content of your expired challenge, which is now deleted:

Challenged Adventurers: @AstralHunter,@Wolfie36, @Wolfare1, @TheWanderingWizard, @r4p17, @15253, @Rydia, @QueenAnne

Storybook: The Wilderness of Machafuko(Chaos)

The Challenge:

Well, seeing as it April, the month of mischief and socializing, my quests for you will dedicated to these two attributes.

The first quest, that of mischief, is fairly simple. Your character(s) are to do/ take/ say something to annoy, mock, aggravate or entertain another character (whether that character be a NPC or another person's character). The only requirement is that it should be in character (ex. Jeremiah is a serious person, thus he won't find many "pranks", you want to call it that, funny/ amusing. Or Kaliska won't take the Observer's favorite teapot just because, etc.) Also, this must not feel out of place in your post, but occur naturally, or at least flow from idea to idea.

My second task for you is that of socializing. This might sound like an easy task at the beginning, but it is far more complicated than that. Your character must commune with another character (NPC or casted character). Your conversation should be either plot progressive, plot developing (developing an already started idea), or character developing (we learn something about their past/ developing or changing of personality traits, etc) Your conversation also shouldn't mainly consist of irrelevant info or Smalltalk.

These two tasks are set so that we can see what your character is truly made of (are the cold and sadistic, or cheery and talkative)

To @Rydia (and the others who aren't close to a lot of characters or NPCs) you may introduce a new, temporary NPC to complete the challenges, as long as young abide by my requirements.

Completion Time: I shall set a maximum amount of posts at three posts per person, with at least two other character's posts between your posts.

Points awarded: If the adventurer were to complete the challenges in their first post (both...), only 1 point is to be awarded. The same applies with only completing 1 challenge, but over the length of the challenge (starting the challenge in post 1 and finishing in post 3).

In the case that both challenges get completed in two-three posts, the person can receive 2-3 points. To qualify for 3 points,the person must write posts over 750 words each, and both quests should be executed excellently.
2points will go to posts under 750 words each and/ or vague/insufficient completion of the quests.
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