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The Wilderness of Machafuko(Chaos), DT



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Tue Dec 30, 2014 12:05 pm
BrumalHunter says...



I repeat: if anyone wants to claim another character, feel free to do so. I shall submit my character pages later today. (That's right, I claimed two - the leader of the Callitrix and his nephew.)
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Wed Dec 31, 2014 10:27 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I apologize for my long, unexpected absence. Our internet unexpectedly ran out the day after Christmas, so I could not go online till now, in the new year. My post aught to come on either today or tomorrow. Happy New Year!!!
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Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:19 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I have made the first post!!! Let the Adventure begin!! Enjoy and have fun people!
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Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:21 pm
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ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Oh, there are also two NPC's that I would like you to read. (I created the Commander and @AstralHunter created Calliarus)
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 2:40 am
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r4p17 says...



So... is the setting for this modern or eighteenth century?
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:48 am
Wolfi says...



I enjoyed your post very much, @TheWanderingWizard! r4p brings up a good point. I know that I, at least, created a contemporary character. @15253, very nice post also! Just one thing... if your character is an exile, why was he on the list? Or was he on the list at all (is the boy working for him)?
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:50 am
StupidSoup says...



Oh, Morn was in the city at the time and volunteered to join Jeremiah on his expedition. No the boy is not, he was sent by Jeremiah in the previous post.
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 9:25 am
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BrumalHunter says...



Frankly, I had thought were in an era akin to the Gunpowder Age...

I'm glad the SB has finally begun! Oh, but @TheWanderingWizard, I think you should create a challenge/challenges in the Challenge Master Thread, you know, for a little motivation and reward.
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 9:32 am
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



I shall create a challenge as soon as each person has made their first post. Just to get everyone started. :-)
Oh, and yes, we are set in the 17th to 18th century, sorry for not clarifying that. *blushes*
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 3:03 pm
r4p17 says...



One more question. Is this set in a fantasy world, or is it a sort of alternate history. I know Wolfie's character was set in the America.
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SpiritedWolfe says...



I would assume it's a fantasy land, talking about this fort and city and center circle thing(...?), correct?
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 3:15 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@r4p17, the intention was never for this SB to be connected to our world; however, since Wolfie's character hails from America, we had to include it. So, now there is a new continent on earth, and it is on this continent that the adventure will take place. The rest of the world may be mentioned, but briefly, and no more than that.

If anyone wants to name it, feel free to make a suggestion. By the way, if a continent simply appears out of nowhere, where would it most likely be? :?:

Spoiler! :
The Pacific Ocean, naturally.


@Wolfare1, it would be best if you treated the rest of earth like a hostile cousin: you acknowledge its existence, but you want nothing to do with it. ;)
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 3:21 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Ah, makes sense. Even though the Pacific Ocean is actually shrinking.

In other, more relevant info, I'll probably wait to write up a post until a few more people have jumped in. Or until my break ends. Whichever comes first.
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 8:42 pm
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Wolfi says...



If the Storybook was supposed to be in a fantasy world, then please, allow me to edit my character. I'll just need to change her history and reason for being here.

EDIT: I will change every reference of "America" to "Layata," a relatively small island of this fantasy world.
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Sat Jan 03, 2015 9:02 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



That would be great, Wolfie! Thank you for understanding. You're a dear. :)
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