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Sun Aug 24, 2014 7:01 pm
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Ciblio says...



I know, I know. I've done that. I just don't know who's already gonna be involved with someone.
And I did spend a long time deciding if she should even be with someone, and I came to the conclusion that she wouldn't until WAY later, that way she would know the person way better & kinda trust them, ya know?
But I am going through the characters again, just cause.
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Tue Aug 26, 2014 10:39 am
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Animal says...



@Skydreamer He's not anymore. I will get it fixed in the pad.
And I was thinking that Dom and Bella can have relationship with Ray which can cause a fight. Just an idea.
By the way, sorry for the delay. Life is busy.
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Tue Aug 26, 2014 10:57 am
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@Animal if your character would be complete without the racism, then please go ahead and edit it out. Unless there is an uplifting end to that aspect, I really prefer not to write about it - if it's just there for the sake of it, that is. It's an issue that is too close to the surface of my reality. (No pity for me y'all! It's just a fact.)

So while there are ways to write about racism to make a story more realistic, (eg the movie Crash) I think it has to be handled with extreme care and sensitivity. It may be just fiction for some, but it's a real life challenge for many, including me.

On a cheerier note, love your latest post @IamTraunt, (not just coz I helped you write it!) :-D

@shinethroughthedark, that works... then why don't you see where the story progresses and give her a love interest if/when the time is right? Note that there is a new character from @Omniclysm coming, I believe. Also, note that pairings that have been decided now may end, to make it more realistic, so "unavailable" characters may become future options for Dom. Don't stress :-)
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Tue Aug 26, 2014 11:06 am
IamTraunt says...



Thanks, Ether ^^

And, yes, don't worry @shinethroughthedark! I'm sure someone will be able to pair up soon.
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Tue Aug 26, 2014 11:08 am
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Skydreamer says...



@Animal, I agree with Ether first and foremost.

Secondly, Bella is already going to be in a relationship with Ray in the future, and there will be conflict with the other girls possibly, so your suggestion is already in place. : )
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Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:30 pm
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IamTraunt says...



Great first entry @megsug! Loved it ^^
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Fri Aug 29, 2014 8:47 am
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IamTraunt says...



So, here's what your SB character could look like soon:

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This is Del ^-^
If you want one, just fill in the form and me and Night will get to it!
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Fri Aug 29, 2014 10:11 am
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Gorgeous!
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:30 pm
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Sonder says...



Alrighty, here we go! I drew Bella and Johnny, and Traunt is working on Kinwe @etherealember. :)

@Skydreamer, tah dah!
Spoiler! :
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And everyone's favorite weirdo, JJ. ^-^

Spoiler! :
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These images belong to me, please ask permission before reproducing or using. Thank you! Enjoy.
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:36 pm
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JJ is awesome but I can't see your first pic!
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:42 pm
Sonder says...



Huh. I tried something else, does it work now?
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:43 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Yep, they both look great! Yours as well, Traunt!
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:51 pm
IamTraunt says...



Awww shucks! Thanks you guys <3 me and Night appreciate it!
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Mon Sep 01, 2014 5:59 am
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@Nightcrawler, now I can't see either of them lol...
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Mon Sep 01, 2014 2:38 pm
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Sonder says...



I think my computer deletes them after a while. Goshdarnit. If anyone wants to see them, just PM me and I can resend them. x.x
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