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Sun Nov 23, 2014 8:02 pm
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Wolfi says...



OH EM GEE!

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Sun Nov 23, 2014 8:10 pm
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So, where do we go from here. It seems like we need to think of a way to continue the plot.
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Sun Nov 23, 2014 9:33 pm
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r4p17 wrote:So, where do we go from here. It seems like we need to think of a way to continue the plot.


Yeah.... I think an encounter with a human or two would be exciting.
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Mon Nov 24, 2014 5:20 pm
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We need a new den, so we have human-contact-opportunities aplenty! More importantly though... I loved the naming! Fantastic/outstanding/awesome post, @Wolfie36!
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 1:48 am
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Daww, thanks James! :)

About the plot... maybe one of the wolves could get caught in a trap, and taken by the humans—who had started the fire—for dog fight purposes and such. The rest of the wolves could try to get he/she back. If it were to be Heather, Kimeya could step in and kind of take the position of Alpha Female for the time being. And of course, we could have a time jump so that all the puppies would be adults.

What do you guys think? Of course, it doesn't have to be Heather, but I think it would work out well with her if we agree with this plot. After all, she does like to take solitary walks (which, so far, seem to be getting her into trouble) and she could stumble upon the trap when she is by herself.

Before all this happens—again, if you all agree—we'll have to find our wolves a new den, as James said. This could involve the interaction with another pack, too, and probably a smaller one of two or three wolves, all of which could be extra character additions.

That concludes my rambling. ;)
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 2:39 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Love it, Wolfie! Having Heather get caught seems most reasonable, but I think Snowflake would probably be the next choice for alpha female, since she was part of the pack before hand.

Another thing I can add to it is that I was planning on having Kimeya take on a more antagonist attitude. Since she's not part of the pack originally, there could be more hostility towards her. Plus, well, she's got a history of murder. She might not be completely right in the head xD
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 2:53 am
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@Wolfie36, I am a little unclear as to the time break. If there were a time break long enough for the pups to grow up then that would mean that we would have already found a den.

I suggest that we first find the den, then have the time break. Subsequently one of the wolves will be trapped and/or encounter another pack or multiple packs.
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:40 am
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Perfect, @r4p17! I think we have a plan. :) And good idea, @Wolfare1!
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 3:28 pm
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Oh, I thought the plan was to find a den first and then have the timelapse, but since we've agreed on that anyway, it's fine. Alright then, let's find our wolves a new den!
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:19 pm
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Wolfi says...



Yes, I thought so too, but we've cleared everything up now.

Who is going to post next? :D @Wolfare1 and @Witchcraft96 haven't gone for a while, but @JamesHunt and @Cynder could go, too, if they'd like.
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 8:17 pm
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Shall I write the naming ritual from my perspective? I would be happy to, but maybe we should first discuss what the actual ceremony will entail. Any suggestions?
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Hey, I'd be willing to take over for Dazzler, if no one has taken her yet
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

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Tue Nov 25, 2014 9:00 pm
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Wonderful, @kingofeli! We'd love to have you. You are welcome to edit Dazzler's character page as you wish.
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Tue Nov 25, 2014 9:48 pm
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Do you have a specific place you'd like me to jump in?
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

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Wed Nov 26, 2014 4:10 am
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Wolfi says...



@kingofeli, as long as you understand what's going on, you can go whenever you'd like. Right now, the wolves are trying to find a new den. Dazzler is slightly injured, but not too badly. Good luck, if you decide to go next (although @JamesHunt may want to go before you do).
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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