@Kelpies, let me know if there's anything that needs to be changed! I was thinking that maybe she has some kind of suspicion that @saentiel's character is also a water creature, but it's up to you.
I'm totally looking forward to my character being eaten by mermaids already.. he is a terrible person.
Teach a man to fish, he eats for a day. Don't teach a man to fish, you eat for a day. He's a grown man. Fishing's not that hard. — Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)
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