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Lincoln Wood Private College Prep DT



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Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:18 am
Gravity says...



@TakeThatYouFiend Your character is kinda unique, I don't see much that Hugo actually has in common with Cole. So maybe they aren't a great match?
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

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Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:24 am
AlmondEyes says...



Was I supposed to do a post with someone? I can't remember xD
"What is dead my never die, but rises again, larger and stronger..."

*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Thu Oct 23, 2014 9:24 pm
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LordGreenleaf says...



Hi guys, so I've been looking at Harmony High for a while and am super excited for this SB, so if anyone wants to check out my profile and ask some questions, go ahead.
Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. - Jim Carey
  





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Fri Oct 24, 2014 6:06 am
LordGreenleaf says...



Hello? If you've got any problems with my character just tell me.
Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. - Jim Carey
  





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Fri Oct 24, 2014 11:44 am
Ciblio says...



We can't see you character until gets approved, M'Lord.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Fri Oct 24, 2014 3:30 pm
KingLucifer says...



@Nike use Danny as an NPC I can't write for awhile since both my PC and PS3 crap out on me.
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Fri Oct 24, 2014 3:49 pm
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AlmondEyes says...



LordGreenleaf wrote:Hello? If you've got any problems with my character just tell me.


We can't see your profile until it's approved, so cool down.
"What is dead my never die, but rises again, larger and stronger..."

*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Fri Oct 24, 2014 7:11 pm
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Ciblio says...



crack ya whip, Janika-san xD
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:41 am
LordGreenleaf says...



Ok so I just wanted someone to talk to HUnter at the end of my post, don't care who.

I was thinking Cole or Hawthorn might be potential love interests, but I'm open to suggestions. He can be a bit of a douche sometimes to other guys girls, so mind that.
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Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:48 pm
KingLucifer says...



@LordGreenleaf Danny could easily antagonize HUnter by outdoing him in all of his subjects
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Wed Oct 29, 2014 4:03 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



@LordGreenleaf Hugo could, if you want
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Wed Oct 29, 2014 5:11 pm
Ciblio says...



I actually believe there's going to be a little romance between Collin & Cole.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



previously:
GuyFieri
  





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Wed Oct 29, 2014 7:33 pm
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Nike says...



@Avalon so you aren't gonna write for a while? And is it okay that I made Dafnie interested in Danny?

@shinethroughthedark Rupert is a sort of player guy. He is gonna use her but then when she figures this out, she should give him an ultimatum, be with me for serious or don't talk to me. Then he'll realize he actually wants her and she will say no. And then he will try to win her back. I think that's freaking awesome. He will break her heart, but I think it's totally worth it since he will want her back and stuff. God, this sounds like my life but 100 times better.

THANK YOU @Sunshine FOR BEING THE GREATEST PERSON EVER. You made this Storybook alive when I couldn't. I'm going to be thanking you forever and ever more. Not plus one day, but an even more forever.

I think all the characters need to gather up in one event, so that's why I made Jessie have that party. All the characters should go there and interact.
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Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:08 pm
NicoleBri says...



@Nike if you were referring to Isabelle in your post when you said she had the best black her..... and so on, she actually has long brown hair with a reddish tint too it! :)

Also I don't think Jessie would be inviting Isabelle to any party of hers so she definitely wasn't invited, I think I might have her show up unannounced though! :)
Last edited by NicoleBri on Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:13 pm
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TakeThatYouFiend says...



@Nike you say you want all the characters at one place, but who the hell would invite Hugo to the party? Nobody knows him and he's two years below the host.
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  








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