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think tortwags up next

@Charizard821 As a matter of fact, no you didn't. Rewrite your post entirely and I might be pleased.

Also, You're welcome for the Sonic thing It's one of my funniest GIF from Deviantart. Period.


@15253 Fits so far. We definitely feel the psychology in this post of yours, so objective complete!

@Verser I totally am up next. Unless someone has something planned/unplanned as well, in which case I wouldn't mind at all if this person posted first. Robusto's lettin' us doin' our thing, and none of the other Humons are in my group, sooooo... We can go nuts, guys.

That I am @Tortwag.
Though I wouldn't want to jump too quickly to Cutthroat Pass.

Excuse me for saying this, but I had no idea everyone was going to Terraria before they split up. And this is coming from the guy who realized from the start that he had heard from an earlier post than one of the most recent ones about Kyogre's plans to flood the Greatwood Jungle. XD I'm assuming (yes, I know what it makes out of you and me. Leave me alone. ) that 15253 didn't know about our characters heading to Terraria either.

Since Hunter has some ideas in mind for what he wants to write, I have no problems writing after he's finished. I don't have any ideas myself.

@Tortwag, "As a matter of fact, no you didn't." Thanks for the late night heart attack. XD

Honestly, to nail Twinkiel, I just put myself in my extrovert body. You see, I'm both an introvert and an extrovert. My introvert body is Riley, while Twinkiel, minus the sadism, very much represents my extrovert body; loud, proud, referential, comedic and slightly evil. (I'm what you call a troll.) That's why it's so fun writing Twinkiel! I get to be my wacky self!

As for Riley though, I thought about it, and you may actually have a tough time. I'll give you some tips to help you out.
-Riley is only just coming out of his shell. He's quiet at first during conversation but can get quite involved as it goes on.
-Riley will be referred to as Rift by Twinkiel, otherwise the purpose of that is defeated. XD
-Riley is an emotional guy who acts on those emotions as well as impulse
-Riley can hold a character
-Riley is a comedian, and tends to use referential puns and exaggerated sarcasm to get his humour across
-Riley will likely shy away from a challenge, so it's not likely you'll be battling him any time soon

I can't think of anything else right now. Don't let that list intimidate you. (I know that happens to me when writers describe their characters.) All in all, be creative. I can work with nearly anything, and it's Twinkiel's unpredictability that makes working with him so fun. Follow the guidelines if you want, but just have a good time with it! I intend for these guys to be bros to the close at the end of this.

(Also, bromance? Really? XD)

@Charizard821 You. are. Welcome It's my specialty!

Well that's exactly the mindset you need for Twinkiel. GO NUTS.
Oh. Interesting. No 'cause my extrovert side is exactly what Twinkiel is. See how Twinkiel randomly approaches you with references you don't get, sadistic laugh and smile? That's me in real life, lol. You heard my laugh once, so you might remember it being... Evil. So yeah, you're a troll, well that's fine, as I'm a creep :3
My introverted side (which people always forget about) is me thinking a lot, isolating myself and not talking. Which also mean that I have the best stealth ability as long as I don't use my loud-as-heck voice. A common dialogue between me and people ressembles to:
"*random people talking with friends*
*me approaching, no noise*
"Excuse me, what's the ti-"
*scream*
*evil grin* "I have startled the Witch! No but seriously, ladies, what's the time?"
*nervous laugh. Stare. Tells the time*
^I love my life, lol.

Thanks for the list. it's not intimidating at all actually, I was gonna ask for it at some point. I'm totally using it and twist it my own way
Also, considering what I'm planning fot both of them, they may have a... "fight" sooner than you think.
... As for the rest, I actually think I can handle Riley... Well enough, I hope. I mean he sounds like me when I started to open up again after the delightfully darkest period of my highschool life. Plus I'm impulsive when angry.
And yes they'll totally become bros, though that spot will have yi be shared with Zulu.
(Yes, really. Are you surprised by the word or just me using it?)

@Robusto ah, so you're planning to post before I do? Because yes I do wanna see a Zulu post.

well I know, I didn't want to jump ahead either, but I thought we were supposed to do that after reading 15253's post. Twinkiel is flying over Sazandora though, so he ain't meet Darius yet.
...unless they pause for a bit... Hmm... And he doesn't know he's Wanted yet...
...I need to think about this post...

Wait a minute, I thought Darius was having an altercation with Riley. How does that work if any of you guys met up with him?

@Tortwag, a "fight"? Hmm... Reveal your secrets! But seriously,
I'm excited to work closer with you. Hopefully Buggie doesn't peace out to another group because she's also great to work with. (And I'm surprised you used the word. XD)

Okay, poll time: I've been pondering this for years. What would you do if you were the only Pokemon trainer on Earth with the one and only Pokemon on Earth? (And no, there are none on other planets.) To make it interesting, would you even bother if that Pokemon was a Lvl1 Magikarp?

Nothing is really decided with Darius just yet. He's a wildcard.
@Tortwag: I suppose I could break my vow of temporary non-posting and put up a Zulu post. I'll get started on it right away.

@Charizard821 That's the thing: not necessarily. As Robusto just said, he's a wildcard, and that's 'cause he's a bounty hunter. Darius has obtained the bounties of Twinkiel and Gabriel, but Riley is a Riolu from the resistance, so assuming that he ran through the Sazandora desert, he might run into him and get in trouble. But Darius is also on the move because of the bounties, so anything could happen with him really. It was just food for thought.

Secrets... Heh. Let's just say that Twinkiel has his own ways to destroy anger, angst or anything in between.
Said ways being quite radical, for some. I won't get into more details yet, Twinkiel and Riley aren't together for now :p
Thank you, and so am I! Riley's much less "normal" than I originally anticipated, I'd definitely like to have some team battles/dialogues with him.
(Char, this is the moment where I reveal that I use any word from anywhere as long as I find it personally cool, appropriate to the situation or chaotic enough to my liking. Beware )

As for your poll... I'd dedicate a part of my life to learn where he exactly came from and how, and would begin creating the Pokemon species with some other wild tamers/animal specialists. I'd also train my Pokemon in as many forests and jungles as I can.
If it was a lv1 Magikarp, yes I'd bother. He can get stronger by fighting against current, and that's actually how he freakin' evolves. I'd wait patiently and enjoy raising my future Leviator.
EDIT: I mean Gyarados. Sorry, French.

@Robusto You don't have to, y'know, but thanks. Zulu's currently sharing Twinkiel and Ariala's spot on Fleedjio's back, so I thought I'd hear from him one last time before you laid back.

Working on it now. Hopefully it shall be completed before the night is out.

O_O GUYS ROBUSTOS GIVING US HINTS!

*Inspects new avvie closely*

I believe.....someone....might evolve soon >3>

@Robusto, @Verser asked whether his character in the prequel could be a Zoroark.

@15253, Ho-Oh is at Mt. Icewind, not at the Glacial Museum. Just so you don't confuse the two, Mt. Icewind is the New Order fortress, while the Glacial Museum is an actual museum located on top of Mt. Icewind. And yes, he will be fighting, but against Gabriel. (Ren and Absol will deal with the other Pokémon Ho-Oh will have brought with him.) Also, he doesn't die.

I know Fleur tags along, but I'm not sure if Xerneas will also go along, just in case the mission goes awry. Either way, both of them will enter the Museum, but not the Mystery Dungeon.

@Tortwag, allow me to explain. Xerneas had rushed through the mountains dividing the Northern Plains with the Sazandora Desert because he urgently needed to get to the Shrine of Safety, since everybody had already been waiting. However, Xerneas, Gabriel and Fleur (as well as Aegeas, Ren and Absol) aren't as rushed now, so they can afford to walk east at a reasonable pace. They will have to camp next to the Desert for a night, and then resume the next morning, arriving at Frostpoint Village later that day. (So, they'll probably arrive at Frostpoint on Day A7 at sometime between 12:00 PM and 5:00 PM.)

Jewels, Raikou and Flurry, as well as Twinkiel, Zulu, Fleedjio and Ariala, will head south-east through the heart of the Sazandora Desert, making for the Foothills in which Amity Village is located. On their way, they will come upon Darius' hideout and naturally free Miss Altaria and her associates. After that, Flurry's party will either stay at Amity, or they will continue to travel with Twinkiel's party through the Alluvial Farmlands. After that, the two parties will go their separate ways, but don't worry about it yet - the two parties will probably reach Darius' hideout by the end of Day A6, and by the end of Day A7, they will reach Amity Village. If they stay the night, then they will reach the Alluvial Farmlands by the end of Day A8, and then it's simply another day's travel before they reach Mt. Providence (if Flurry's party goes there) or the Cutthroat Pass.

@AstralHunter OH! Thanks for that XD I thought they were two different places. Yeah I agree no ones nemesis should die yet.

Anyhow, will we have the battle in the Glacial Museum or will we have it outside it? Or will the confrontation happen, I wanna say below? In the Icewind base?

@Charizard821, I finally read your post, and I still believe everything I have said about your writing thus far holds true. I was smiling almost the entire time, but not because I found it amusing; on the contrary, my heart bled for Riley, and since Gabriel had experienced the same... No, I was smiling because I couldn't help but admire writing and how you expertly managed to weave my post into yours. My friend, your work is truly commendable.

On an anti-climax, I am delighted to see everyone is using the Day A-time system, but there seems to be a some confusion as to where we currently are. In the storybook, it is now Day A5 (not A6), somewhere around 9:00 AM to 10:00 AM.should say ).

@Robusto, please don't post yet. I'm busy working on a post for both Gabriel and Jewels. Techinically, it should be between Char and 15253's posts, so it would be better if there weren't anymore posts before it. I don't want to mess with time too much - that's Dialga's job.

PS: Noivern rules!

@AstralHunter Heeeey XD
it's a good thing you slept, because you now find yourself in an unplanned situation, which will keep you active. You slept, so you have the energy to deal with your situation.
You're welcome
(that and I never said "enjoy yourself without watching the DT progress"...)
But thanks for the explanation. So you want to post before Robusto? D'you need to post before me as well?