@pandabear7 there wasn't a "problem" with it haha. Simply that it didn't quite make sense the way it read. Like, I was trying to get away but the view was pleasant. I simply thought that it would've done better either without that tidbit or if you elaborated on it, as in like...having Karina's thoughts wander from her frustration to "well at least the view is nice." Know what I mean? Not a big deal, though
Sorry for the confusion everyone! I swear, every single time I have to go somewhere for a few hours EVERYTHING happens hahaha. I had a full day of classes, visiting the hospital, and I just got back from a fashion show rehearsal, and it's really late so I'm not going to bother making a post because it would just be really crapy - I'll post tomorrow, dearies!
Haha no fiction. I meant calling him like calling his name. I knew that Lakeland and Liz were going to be a thing.
It does not bother me but I think it could cause some fun drama between characters. Like oh crap she likes another guy. I think it would be funny if she started liking all the guys. One minute she could like one, then the next minute she likes another guy
Sometimes the smallest things take up the most room in your heart -Winnie the Pooh
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