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Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:25 pm
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jimss23 says...



Ok, we are set for tomorrow. I will be writing in first person as I think it works best for my character. Please feel free to write how you wish. I look forward to reading your first submission!

Cheers
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Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:39 pm
sheysse says...



Ooh, we're starting! Sweet! I'll try and get my character made tonight.
  





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Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:45 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Random note, and you can see it as a tiny nitpick, as that's what it is:

Since Raphael de Leon is a girl, her name should be written Raphaelle, since that's the european female version of the name (and also her full name seems to be typically French, so, that's totally how it works in that language too). I legit thought she was a man until I looked at the photo because of that stupid/understandable language rule.
Again: just a little something to fix later. I'm usually not very nitpicky - especially not for SBs, since the point is to enjoy the world regardless of the grammar or style of whoever's writin' - but this is for the sake of naming conventions.

...I still can't wait for tomorrow.


Good luck, Sheyren! Let's see if we'll get another Greywood from you, or something different but about as awesome :3
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:49 pm
sheysse says...



I'm aiming for something different, but we can all watch them fall into the Greywood character type. XD
  





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Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:54 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Don't worry, makin' something different is gonna be hard to me too, lol. But this time I'm confident due to a few successes (Kysaline actually bein' one of them). You'll be fiiiine~
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Mon Jun 05, 2017 9:28 pm
jimss23 says...



@Tortwag

I changed her name to Reya.
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Mon Jun 05, 2017 10:36 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@jimss23 'Kay! Guess that works too.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon Jun 05, 2017 11:09 pm
jimss23 says...



@Tortwag

Yea, I thought it was best if I change it. Phonetics, where I am at, are a little weird and I would never stop seeing Raphaelle as Rapha-elle, so I just had to change it.
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One girl to challenge them both

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Tue Jun 06, 2017 12:46 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



Oooh, that's why! Welp, that makes even more sense.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:03 am
jimss23 says...



Approved.

I like the Lightning-Ice idea. I'm gonna let you figure out what element or ability that will result in xD.

Hopefully will see you around tomorrow for the first posts!
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Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:03 am
sheysse says...



@jimss23 used Approve! It's super effective!

Pending Character Template fainted!
  





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Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:06 am
sheysse says...



I have this whole idea for the end, when everyone gets super badass and is extremely powerful. It's gonna be lightning strikes, but they're gonna be made of ice, and electric energy is gonna glow from within, and... *attempts to mimic concept with hand gestures but just waves hands pointlessly* It's gonna be fricking sick.
  





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Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:11 am
jimss23 says...



Lit. xD


Wanna call it the Crystal Technique?
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Tue Jun 06, 2017 2:59 am
jimss23 says...



Alright, so it is 11:00 pm here and I am not a super patient person as @Basil can tell you when it comes to wanting to get things done so I'm gonna go ahead and post my first post. At this point, anyone is welcome to post afterward. I'm also going to change the SB to "Started" and it will remain open to anyone. If you know anyone who is looking for something to do and has an interest in SB's, let them know about this one. The more views we get the better chance we have of making this thing grow. I look forward to seeing what you all post. Let's do this!

P.S.

Prepare yourselves for the sheer jackassery that is Sullivan Rayis.
This is the Rule of Three
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Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  








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