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Lincoln Wood College Prep: Senior Year DT



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Mon May 16, 2016 7:47 pm
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Ciblio says...



OH DANG
OH DANGGGGGGGG
KYLE YOU IDIOT
i get way too into the storyline
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till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Mon May 16, 2016 7:55 pm
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passenger says...



I KNOW. I HATE KYLEEE
Lol don't worry, I get way too into the storyline too, as you know
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Mon May 16, 2016 7:59 pm
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AlmondEyes says...



@Ciblio, did you get my PM?
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Mon May 16, 2016 10:51 pm
Ciblio says...



Oh shoot. Yes I did, Almond! You can post & go ahead and add her in there if you'd like?
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Tue May 17, 2016 3:17 am
AlmondEyes says...



I see that you're on, but I can't find you in chat xD
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Sun May 22, 2016 3:39 pm
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Ciblio says...



it's great, @AlmondEyes. I'll get a post up as soon as I can.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Mon May 23, 2016 3:28 am
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AlmondEyes says...



Ok!! I'm glad you liked it ^^
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Fri May 27, 2016 11:59 pm
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HazelGrace16 says...



So is the wedding going to be before the first day of school, or after? I didnt know if we have a decided first day yet or not.
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Sun May 29, 2016 4:16 am
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Gravity says...



I'm a little confused @AlmondEyes @Nike. Nobody told me about this breakfast thing.

I normally don't get upset over the little things but this is not how Colette would be acting at all. Social situations make her nervous, she would especially be nervous around Merrick because of how built he is and he's a male that Colette doesn't know. She wouldn't be talking very much, either, even if she had agreed to go out.

Sorry, I really hate nit picking but she was raped less than a month prior and developing her character is essential to me.
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Sun May 29, 2016 5:25 am
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@Gravity, you were the one who told me I could use her in a post if I wanted to, and also, I have no idea how long ago her assault was because I haven't seen you keep a timeline in your posts for her. Also, I don't understand how Cole wouldn't know Merrick, because he usually hangs out with Rupert, and isn't she usually with him? I don't understand how she wouldn't know him.
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Sun May 29, 2016 8:42 am
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@Gravity @AlmondEyes uh Cole does know Merrick. She's seen him plenty of times. And character development? I get it but it's been a few months after. We are into the summer. I get that she needs time to recover and that's fine. But this breakfast is of her and her friends. She's with people she should feel safe around. But if you really don't approve of anything that we wrote than fine, I'll delete all my posts. I just don't understand what we could've done wrong.
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Sun May 29, 2016 8:07 pm
Gravity says...



@Nike @AlmondEyes

I wrote out a post trying to explain my feelings but I give up. Forget I said anything, I really don't care anymore.
And the heart is hard to translate
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And prayers and proclamations

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Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:43 pm
Ciblio says...



I'm sorry you're upset, @Gravity, but I hope you don't take it all too seriously. As much as I hate to admit it, this is a made up story with characters that do not, in any way, change/affect our lives. It's cool. Just chill & try to work something out.
also i'm almost done with a post for Jessie. Sorry it took so long to write one! This is my first day off in a week.
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by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:47 pm
Gravity says...



@Ciblio

can we just drop it?
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And prayers and proclamations

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Wed Jun 01, 2016 3:19 pm
Ciblio says...



I love how that's what's said when I'm tryna help
nvm then
i was just trying to get a post up so y'all didn't have to wait any longer but I'll go do other stuff.
sorry i'm not siding with ya
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by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



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