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Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:06 pm
Shadowlight says...



Sati is freaking awesome- and I totally loved his creeper yet no in a creepy way behavior. XD
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 4:10 pm
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crossroads says...



Haha, thank you both :3

He will show soon enough that he can be a bad guy too if needed, though
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:31 pm
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Saja want's to know why Sati stopped being her friend when she wasn't a baby anymore.
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:49 pm
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Shadowlight wrote:Saja want's to know why Sati stopped being her friend when she wasn't a baby anymore.


He wanted to remember her as a baby, without any wishes and without anything that corrupts the hearts and souls of adults.. He lives for a long time, so he met all kinds of people, and pretty much he lost his faith in anyone staying the way they were as a little child.
Besides, children tend to wish for a toy with all their hearts, and Sati loves those kinds of wishes - but he doesn't want to fulfill them, as that may be bad for the child. So he backs away.

He will be her friend again if she seeks him, though. He doesn't even know if Saja remembers him.
It may be hard for him to stop himself from taking his price for making her wishes come true, but other than that, they should be fine :smt001
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:55 pm
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Oh..... >:3 Saja might surprise him if they do meet again. *evil ideas*
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:00 am
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Shadowlight wrote:Oh..... >:3 Saja might surprise him if they do meet again. *evil ideas*


I'm just writing his chapter.. He's in her room (which is kind of awkward again, but again, he's a Genie so he's forgiven), and feel free to start a conversation right after it ^_^
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:06 am
Shadowlight says...



NICE!
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:05 am
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Just edited my profile into my post on Page 1 :) I'll do an Airan post tomorrow.

Also Airan is an anagram of Rania, which was unintentional, but makes me happy.
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 5:41 pm
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Hey note to those my charries are in contact with- I work till late tonight so I won't be able to post, I'm sorry- I'll try to post tomorrow though!
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:41 pm
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Can I use Saja for a talk with Sati?


Oh, and Kassim should meet Dania, as she'll be brought to him by that magic guy.. I'm not sure how to portray him if I write about that meeting, so I'd like it to be in his chapter, if that's ok.. You can PM me if need anything :)
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 9:56 pm
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I kind of don't know what to do with Zia. Any suggestions?
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:02 pm
Leahweird says...



In an immediate context, or in general?
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:20 pm
crossroads says...



If you don't know, you can always make her walk around a little and observe people, to show us the way she thinks/talks.. That makes it easier for others to include her in their chapters later, and same works vice versa :)
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Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:28 pm
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Sunshine wrote:I kind of don't know what to do with Zia. Any suggestions?


Send her to an assassin :D
Save time... see it my way.

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