Young Writers Society

I'm back! :] I'll read over and contribute tomorrow morning :]

We should start a fourth soon! Definately bring Jack back

I've gone ahead and made Riley's cousin's profile. It's going to be interesting having her around....

Ben, I must admit, you last post and my last post are going to make things very interesting in the RHG4.

Kaywiia wrote:Ben, I must admit, you last post and my last post are going to make things very interesting in the RHG4.

I thought it might

I love this Storybook! Seriously, there is nothing more amazing. It has twist after twist. I love all of you

Thanks Ben! This is going to be a blast. I have an idea to throw in the middle of this that.... (I've said too much already) well, it's a surpirse.

Well, I guess this is relevant for RHG 4.

I have internet now. Sorry, sorry. I feel horrible,but Guam is not too Wi-Fi friendly (in the area I live anyway) and I don't have a car to go over to like Tumon or something, so I had to wait for them to come and fix the internet in my house. But. They just fixed it, and I just connected five minutes ago, and I'mma go check everything out now.

Luff.

PS. I'm about 99% sure I'm not gonna drop off the face of YWS again, so I'll be posting regularly again.

Can't wait to get started! Again!

Yay! Welcome back Vanadis.

Welcome back everyone who has came back. I am just waiting for bondgirl007...

I love the way chapter four is starting off. Kay, your doing a good job making Riley the least likeable person to walk this earth. It's funny reading what she's thinking. I loved this:

That Captain was getting a taste of his own medicine, Riley style.

I thought that was really funny.

Anyway, love the SB so far!

MayApple wrote:I love the way chapter four is starting off. Kay, your doing a good job making Riley the least likeable person to walk this earth. It's funny reading what she's thinking. I loved this:

That Captain was getting a taste of his own medicine, Riley style.

I thought that was really funny.

Anyway, love the SB so far!

/agree.

Though...

I'm almost not sure what to do. Ace is taking over my mind and writing himself into corners. Especially with Ma and Comman-Dad in jail, if he wants his meds, he'll probably have to steal them now...I'm having trouble thinking of ways to NOT make him die. Even though I don't really want to let him...for a while I did, now I don't... gah.

Then there's the matter of what Gracie feels like doing. I think there was a reason behind the madness, but it's all lost focus now. That and she was never really "assisting" the gang before, other than keeping her kid alive, but the cops are putting ideas into her head. She could probably, somewhat easily, pull a "Shut up, cops, I outrank you all" and break out and then start assisting through Ace. But that would put her kinda on the run, too, unless she could evade court-martial. I have no idea.

Suggestions? Do you guys care for any of these?

Vanadis,

Note, this is taking place way in the future so (like RedSun's Alis with the all-healing leaf mentioned in RHG3) if you got creative, I bet there are plenty of ways for Ace to survive. I bet RedSun could have Alis pull out another one of those leaves. Your character, though, it's really up to you.

"She could probably, somewhat easily, pull a "Shut up, cops, I outrank you all" and break out and then start assisting through Ace."- I think this might work, and it's kind of funny.

Hope I helped a little.

Yes, that is true. So I guess he'd just have to quit being proud and actually ask for help. Thanks!

Ill try and post by tonight, it's just been quite busy recently.

@Vanadis: When Reg escapes the cell holding in the next post, he will stumble across Gracie Finn, is that ok? I don't think they've met before and it could be interesting to work with. My character will be slightly mental at this point.

@Kaywiia: You told me to notify you when Reg is about to re-meet with the gang. Well, after abour 2-3 posts he will be in Texas (as that's where I've located the jail) and you could run into him before/after the Gala is on?