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Sun Sep 11, 2016 11:01 am
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Lightsong says...



I've done the CT, now waiting for approval! :D

EDIT: Also, I'm wondering about the weapons Summer Lady Analia would be using. I'm planning for a basket of Roses, each of them able to transform into a human-size carnivorous beasts who could injure the enemies with their thorns (the Roses would trap them first, tortured them with their thorns, then devoured them with the Roses's humongous mouth with sharp teeth at the middle of the petals).

There would be some restrains tho this, I promise.
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Mon Sep 12, 2016 11:12 pm
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I submitted a CT, just waiting for it to be accepted.
I'll try to whip up a post soon, if it is. Also, I might snatch a Mortal Ally, if nobody takes it, hehe
  





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Tue Sep 13, 2016 2:37 am
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Good post @Lightsong, just one error that I could see. The winter Queen's name is Isole not Isolt.
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Tue Sep 13, 2016 5:45 am
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Ah! Sorry about that! I'll fix it! xD

EDIT: I've also made Analia order a Summer soldier to help protect Udara, so Sonya won't have to take care of her alone. :D
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Tue Sep 13, 2016 5:59 am
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Rydia says...



That sounds good for weapons @Lightsong and lovely post and character profile!

Wonderful profiles by @Moonwatcher and @TheForgottenKing as well, this is shaping up to be a super strong caste!
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Tue Sep 13, 2016 3:45 pm
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Thanks, Rydia! :D As you can read from my post, there are some more cards Analia has under her sleeve, but they're not going to be offensive in nature, and one of them is the Rafflesia seed (I was tempted to include it was one that was native to Malaysia, too xD).

I hope someone can take the Summer Knight spot. The cast seems to be imbalance between Summer and Winter.
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Tue Sep 13, 2016 10:44 pm
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Astronomer says...



Woo, CT approved. I think they'll probably end up siding with Summer. I think my character has a little bit in common with Udara when it comes to protecting life, and should help balance the two sides a little bit.
  





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Wed Sep 14, 2016 3:36 am
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That's good to hear! I'm deciding what Analia should be in the war; a strategist, a leader, or a scholar? She has the potential to be any one of them, but I know the best one is one that fits her character.

EDIT: @Rydia, lovely post, I love it that you make the Summer soldier interesting, while making Udara as awesome as ever. :3 And I know what Analia will do next.
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Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:24 pm
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I'm working on a post for both Sonrya and Isole! I apologize about the delay.
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Sat Sep 17, 2016 8:20 am
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@Omnom: Can't wait to see Isole's PoV! :D

I want to make another post, but I have to wait for others who haven't yet... ;-; (Yes, I'm focusing on this one SB only because it's the only one in which I'm involved, and it's quite small in scale)
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Sat Sep 17, 2016 7:12 pm
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Gah, I'm starting on a post. However, I've never read the Dresden Files so I constantly check to see if my writing is accurate, so it may take some time.
  





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Sun Sep 18, 2016 5:54 am
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I also have never read the books! xD I'm going with what I perceive about the world and the characters. c: More experienced SBers are generous to help me if I get something wrong, so thanks for that! :D
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Sun Sep 18, 2016 8:03 am
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Yeah I don't read stuff haha I've just been kinda going with the flow and probably conpletely ruining any correlation to the source material. It's my specialty so you're all fine!
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Sun Sep 18, 2016 8:16 am
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@Omnom: The trees dividing the battlefield, do they have time limit for their existence, or does it require a powerful spell/magic to destroy them? I'm thinking that the war will be greatly affected if it's the latter, because the only character I think that can neutralize them is Isole (and perhaps with the help of her respective spirit, too).
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Sun Sep 18, 2016 8:28 am
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I hadn't thought about it! I think that my answer will be that while they aren't temporary, I don't know of any way to get through them. Perhaps it'll be a plot point for our characters, figuring out a way to get through the tree.
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