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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:11 am
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VampireSenshi says...



That sounds safe - or just edit him out
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:12 am
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Redfang18 says...



Editing him out's more fair.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:17 am
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Dragonette says...



Soooo sorry Fang! I'll go edit that part out :/
And it's ok Katkage, definitely not your fault, I'm just super busy and was only able to write my post bit by bit and didn't see your post until I finished it. And I'm too busy to change it. So I'm sorry for that too. Gosh, I'm just messing up left and right, arn't I? *sighs*
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:28 am
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KatKage says...



It's ok.
Now I have to delete the fact Tara had companions at all, yah?
*facepalm*
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:30 am
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Redfang18 says...



No hard feelings, folks.
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Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:48 am
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KatKage says...



Ok, I fixed it ^^
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 2:53 am
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KingLucifer says...



What time is it in the SB daytime right? I'm waiting on Double I's post plus I can't post unless I'm on a PC cause my posts a rather huge. And I have a very small character limet on my PS3.
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 2:59 am
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Redfang18 says...



It's daylight in the SB. Some characters are already out and about, while one's still dormant for the time being.
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 4:08 am
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Name: Deliah Redkei
Gender: Shes a lady!
Age: 18

Appearance: Delilah has pixie cut hair that is rich brown with copper hilights. Her face is heart shaped and tan. She is medium hight and average weight. her eyes are green-ish blue and she has muscular legs for running but relativly weak arms. She wears a black coat with mismatched buttons and black pants. she also wears a grey newsboy cap, it was her fathers

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Skills: Shes an abnormal but has great fighting and deception skills.

Personality: Deliah seems sarcastic at first, but only to protect herself. She fears being alone because she has been alone all her life. When she gets to know you she'll lighten up and become friendlier. She cares deeply about those close to her and is very afraid of losing them. She is protective and worrisome.

History: Delilah was born to loving parents and lived in a pretty small house with her parents, her brother, and her grandparents. she never took the small house for granted because she knew she was loved. when she was 4, she was at school. her friend had fallen and was crying. when delilah reached out to touch her shoulder she felt an odd sensation and pulled her hand away. She ran home after school and told her parents who knew little of the abnormals but knew that their daughter wasn't the same as the others. they talked to their close neighbors who rudely suggested they kick their kindergarten daughter out. the parents sent the girl to live with her cousins across the forest, but the girl ran away soon after. After about 6 months on her own she was found by her now adoptive father, Morgan, one of the resistance.

Up for love: yes, straight

Other: Nothing I can think of. Terribly sorry for being so late.
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:59 am
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tenshou says...



My character has been flying solo so far but that might change depending on what the king has to say...;)
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 11:00 am
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tenshou says...



I sort of mentioned that Morgan and Alem knowing each other...
Because Morgan doesn't hate the abnormals and I didn't want Alem to be s complete loner.. ^^'
I hope that's okay! if not I can change my post..
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:31 pm
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Caesar says...



It works, tenshi.

Although lol, you rebels and abnormals have placed Jake in one hell of a mess. Morgan needs to speak to the abnormal, deal with Erina (quickly and above all painfully ;) ), and track down the rebels.

Also, Side, mayhaps Kirby isn't so useless as Jake once though. That was a decent job with the tracking.

ALSO, for those that don't know, or in any case as a reminder, Jake is developing a machine that drains the abnormals of their powers and allows Jake to use them for himself, including the elements they've stolen. It's not complete yet, but it's no secret. A lot of abnormals (NPC or not) willingly give themselves to Jake, thinking that once drained of their powers, they can be considered normal (as well as being able to interact with people physically and so on). This is true, Jake's not lying: the machine can safely drain abnormals of their powers. What Jake omitted is that it's not always safe, some abnormals die during the process.
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:18 pm
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tenshou says...



Oh, that's sounds interesting :P
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:21 pm
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Dragonette says...



Oooooh, me likie that idea! Good plot thinking, Itali :D
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:31 pm
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Caesar says...



xD Danke. MM and RF also deserve just as much credit.
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