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Tue Apr 07, 2015 9:41 pm
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TheCrimsonLady says...



Okay.
Guys, guys, guys.
Stop passive-aggressively arguing :).

@TheWanderingWizard and @AstralHunter, I thank you for trying to defend the work I put into this storybook (and also, Wanderer, thank you for the compliments, however unintentional). Still, seeing as you haven't seen @15253's character yet, you might be a bit early in telling him off.

After all, if I find a problem with someone's character, I'll ask them to fix it. And that does goe for repetitiveness, too, you know.

I take no offence in my storybook being called a thingy (but if you could cease the textchat, that would be much appreciated, 15253).

And finally, absolutely none of you know what my version of hell looks like. For all you know, they could be in pools of liquid nitrogen or in blocks of ice. So don't make the common assumptions about Hell just yet :) .

@Kanome, of course you can join. Please submit your character profile in the next two weeks.
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Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:03 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@15253, Vinn actually is an original character. Well done! In fact, he seems to be the most decent character of the four. (Five, if my character page is accepted.)
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:26 pm
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StupidSoup says...



Thanks @AstralHunter :D

I actually did try on this one :3
I have a license that lets me solve aids - A friend of mine


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You gotta have the confidence of a gazelle running through a herd of lions - TK Sharp


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Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:20 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



@AstralHunter

Approved! I like him.

Is anyone willing/planning to create a female character?
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Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:23 pm
SpiritedWolfe says...



I assume @KatyaElefant will create a female character.

(Mine was going to be female, but male won the coin flip :P)
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Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:25 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



XD. If not, I suppose I'll throw a few NPC's in there.
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:01 am
AdmiralKat says...



Yeah, mine will be female! :D I have a devilish plan for my character.
Whale. Whale. Whale. What do we have here?
Some scurvy dog looking at my post, eh?
  





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Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:07 am
TheCrimsonLady says...



Pun intended, Kat?
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:54 am
AdmiralKat says...



Puns are always intended
Whale. Whale. Whale. What do we have here?
Some scurvy dog looking at my post, eh?
  





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Wed Apr 08, 2015 1:08 am
TheCrimsonLady says...



XD I'll look forward to it...
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 2:57 am
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StupidSoup says...



guuuuhhhh please no more puns. I cant take puns ;3;
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Here Comes the Birdyyyy ~Poopsie


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Wed Apr 08, 2015 5:16 am
Kanome says...



I posted my character.
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 6:22 am
ThePatchworkPilgrims says...



Congratulations @15253, you proved me wrong with your character profile. Several people can boast they've proven me wrong, and now you're one of them.

@AstralHunter, nice character as well.

What the devil has gotten into me? I'm being nice today! ;)
Former incarnations have been:
TheWanderingWizard
TheClockworkConjurer
TheIllusiveIntellect
TheSunderingSorceror
And, TheMaieuticMesmerist


Proudly [They/Them]
  





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Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:37 pm
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@AndrewRayne

Approved!

@Kanome

I'd like you to actually describe her in the appearance section, rather than provide a link to something. If you want a picture, you can save it to your computer and upload it (see where it says upload picture?). :) Otherthan that, she's great.
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Wed Apr 08, 2015 4:51 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Woooooooooooow, passive-agressive argument, well this rings a very familiar bell! Wasn't even in that one, too.
...I foreshadow conflicts on visions of Hell later on. And considering even the greatest civilations all had their own versions of it... Yeah let's just say it's too be expected.

Anyway sorry. Creepy time.

...So there's an SB about Hell. And the character must have done something bad by default in order to get there?
OH C'MON, YOU'RE ASKING ME TO JOIN.
Now I know I'll probably have my own SB to worry about later on, as I do plan to create one at some point, but I might as well learn a bit from the wonders of hell here, that and learn how to MANAGE things, assuming that I'm allowed to join, first. 'Cause this right here seem good.
*professional cough* @QueenAnne May I please join your very interesting-looking concept? *Professional CV argument* I am crazy :) (andIdohavesomedegreesofsanityleftasIamactuallyperfectlyawareofeachofmyactions)

That aside... Oh, Hell, huh? I need to design a character profile, then.
Hello people, by the way! You MIGHT have another character to worry about here.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  








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