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Fri Mar 04, 2011 4:36 pm
Kelcia says...



I love hyperbole and a half! Alots are awesome. :D Also, read the one about her trip to Texas... I read it in the school computer lab, and totally cracked up. Yeah, I got some weird looks for that one.... :D

Oh, and I'm working on a post.
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Fri Mar 04, 2011 8:17 pm
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Currently working on a post, I'll have it done shortly.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
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LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Fri Mar 04, 2011 8:24 pm
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Nice. Thanks guys.
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Fri Mar 04, 2011 9:04 pm
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I have posted, just so everyone knows. I should be able to post fairly regularly.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
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Fri Mar 04, 2011 9:25 pm
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Thank you. I'm gonig to try and bring my healer in soon, but first. A post from my General is called for, I believe.
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Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:41 pm
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Okay! Christan's profile is all done now. I need to work on Isolde's post. Where should I start? *is kind of stumped* I'm thinking of a scene where Isolde is sent out of the throne room because of some news her father got about her and wants to discuss with Bristan. And Isolde somehow finds out what it is. Does that, like, work, work?
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:50 am
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Um, no. Altair, the Emperor, the prince, a spy and the Royal Healer are in the throne room. I don't think her just leaving it now when she was never mentioned being in there before will work. Maybe have her mention to being kicked out earlier, before my post with Altair? She could be outside or something?

(My post with Altair being the VERY FIRST post I made.)
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:58 am
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Just posted. Although I may not be able to post often during the next week. I have a lot going on.
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:21 am
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Okay Triplet! *beams*
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Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:09 pm
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Ehhh:( Im lost....
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Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:46 pm
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Okay, people. The Emporor is a free character right now. We'll get nowhere unless we pilot him ourselves until he's claimed. Once he's claimed, we're good. But, I think we should just guess what he's like.
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:47 pm
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Right. It's just that Isolde tends to think of him as more of an open, trusting, bumbling fool sometimes. Maybe that's because she's sore that he doesn't take her advice much. Just saying.
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Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:18 pm
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Ack! Im sooo lost:(
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:05 pm
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Right guys. We need to sort things out. Who's lost? First off; Ravel, Sighed, Shawnee, Isolde and Elphameare in an old, deserted forge. Sanura and Jarelle are in her room. Altair is in a hall headed towards Sanura. Emperor Ziran is in the Throne room. Niran is in his tent. Niton is being carried back towards Lyall after having thre arrows shot into him---by his own brother.

As for the rest? I'm not entirely sure....


Now. Below is a log discussing the Niran and Ziran post I wrote and hopefully the plan to bring together everyone. Please read it carefully.

Spoiler! :
CelticaNoir says(16:23:55):
Well, they are brothers, I suppose. But still. >_<
ScarlettFire says(16:23:56):
I have no idea. It certainly looks like it.
CelticaNoir says(16:24:00):
:D
Varg says(16:24:09):
Then have her on the mission in Chapter 6
ScarlettFire says(16:24:15):
I guess blood is stronger than water....
Varg says(16:24:42):
It's also denser >.>
CelticaNoir says(16:24:44):
Heh. XD
CelticaNoir says(16:24:48):
Aw.
ScarlettFire says(16:24:50):
True, Leth
idraax says(16:24:53):
Yes, that would work
CelticaNoir says(16:24:55):
Bishie's got a Pikuto avvie. XD
ScarlettFire says(16:25:15):
In other words, I guess Niton's ties to his brother are stronger than his ties to Ziran.
idraax says(16:25:19):
It didn't seem to be moving the plot along Arg
CelticaNoir says(16:25:29):
Yeah.
ScarlettFire says(16:25:32):
nods
CelticaNoir says(16:25:38):
Nasty of Niran to do that, though.
ScarlettFire says(16:25:48):
Interesting, isn't it? To get a glimpse into the Emperors.
CelticaNoir says(16:25:51):
I could understand Ravel, but...
ScarlettFire says(16:25:53):
True, Triplet.
CelticaNoir says(16:25:55):
His own brother? :D
ScarlettFire says(16:26:01):
XD
CelticaNoir says(16:26:12):
And it IS very interesting.
ScarlettFire says(16:26:18):
Mmh
CelticaNoir says(16:26:31):
Is it just me or is Ziran allowing his kids a little too much leeway? :D
ScarlettFire says(16:26:35):
I hate it when they do that though. *pokes characters* Stop making me do things....
CelticaNoir says(16:26:55):
Isolde's going to let Elphame go without reporting her, I think.
ScarlettFire says(16:26:57):
lol. He lost his wife. He's a little preoccupied with that to notice /too/ mcuh about his kids.
CelticaNoir says(16:27:01):
:D
ScarlettFire says(16:27:03):
Aww Triplet
CelticaNoir says(16:27:22):
Isolde's got a purpose, and she does emphatize with Elphame.
ScarlettFire says(16:27:27):
Mmh
CelticaNoir says(16:27:36):
You know, since she has her own brother to look after and stuff.
ScarlettFire says(16:27:38):
Everyone seems to have a purpose in this SB
ScarlettFire says(16:27:40):
.me nods
ScarlettFire says(16:27:46):
nods*
ScarlettFire says(16:27:49):
lol /me fail
CelticaNoir says(16:27:50):
Yus. That's what I love so much about it. XD
ScarlettFire says(16:27:52):
XD
CelticaNoir says(16:27:54):
D'aw.
CelticaNoir says(16:27:56):
huggles.
ScarlettFire says(16:27:56):
It's awesome.
ScarlettFire says(16:28:00):
pokes Em
Puzzler says(16:28:01):
glances at chat
CelticaNoir says(16:28:01):
Yus.
ScarlettFire says(16:28:06):
What do you think?
Puzzler says(16:28:09):
Wow, timing XD

CelticaNoir says(16:28:13):
:D
Puzzler says(16:28:13):
What do I think about what?
ScarlettFire says(16:28:17):
Of the TEC post for the Emperors?
Puzzler says(16:28:25):
Oh, I loved it!
CelticaNoir says(16:28:29):
:D
ScarlettFire says(16:28:32):
Good.
ScarlettFire says(16:28:42):
Triplet and I were jsut discussing it.
CelticaNoir says(16:28:44):
The Captains are the most inactive chars in the SB, through.
CelticaNoir says(16:28:47):
*though. XD
idraax says(16:28:52):
Noir, Prussia would be the type to disregard Norway's advice right?
ScarlettFire says(16:28:55):
You know. Possible meanings behind it and such
CelticaNoir says(16:28:59):
Yep, Idraagon.
ScarlettFire says(16:29:02):
I know, Triplet
CelticaNoir says(16:29:05):
Yuuuuuuus/
CelticaNoir says(16:29:11):
Anyways.
CelticaNoir says(16:29:18):
*posts for Isolde*
ScarlettFire says(16:29:28):
Yesss
CelticaNoir says(16:29:40):
At least she's not inactive. She's way too insistent to be inactive. :D
ScarlettFire says(16:29:57):
And right about now, I need Isolde or her brother to turn up in the throne room
idraax says(16:29:58):
needs to rewrite parts now
CelticaNoir says(16:30:03):
Hrm.
ScarlettFire says(16:30:13):
Also, did you check Sanura's profile then reread that post?
CelticaNoir says(16:30:13):
That's going to be a bit difficult, buuuut.
ScarlettFire says(16:30:19):
But?
CelticaNoir says(16:30:21):
Doing. XD
Puzzler says(16:30:28):
*sighs* I need to get Jo to WORK with meee
ScarlettFire says(16:30:29):
Awesome.
Puzzler says(16:30:30):
FLEMMEH
CelticaNoir says(16:30:33):
She's kind of stuck with this group for a little while longer. :D
Flemzo says(16:30:36):
hai
idraax says(16:30:40):
hey
Puzzler says(16:30:41):
FLemmmmm
Puzzler says(16:30:46):
Did you ever get that call?
idraax says(16:30:48):
Be back. I have to go eat lunch
Puzzler says(16:30:48):
DIDJA?
ScarlettFire says(16:30:52):
Find a way to finish off the scene with the others and make her way back to the palace.
ScarlettFire says(16:30:55):
Mmh
idraax says(16:31:01):
waits for Zo's answer
ScarlettFire says(16:31:04):
Well, eventually. x.x
wickedwonder says(16:31:10):
What phone call?
CelticaNoir says(16:31:24):
Her BROTHER? XD
Flemzo says(16:31:28):
well, considering it's a week past when i would have gotten it, and i haven't mentioned it since last week.....
idraax says(16:31:34):
:(
ScarlettFire says(16:31:35):
blinks
ScarlettFire says(16:31:36):
Huh?
CelticaNoir says(16:31:42):
General Aiyanna. XD
ScarlettFire says(16:31:54):
...Brother? Are you sure?
idraax says(16:31:55):
Be back now
Puzzler says(16:31:55):
Scar, are you talking about the scene with Isolde, Rav and Seg and Shawnee and the tracker?
Puzzler says(16:31:57):
D'awwww Flemmeh D:
ScarlettFire says(16:31:58):
raises an eyebrow
CelticaNoir says(16:31:58):
Well..
Puzzler says(16:32:00):
clings
ScarlettFire says(16:32:05):
Yes, Em
CelticaNoir says(16:32:11):
Her dad? O.o
Puzzler says(16:32:19):
Shawnee... go to the palace?
ScarlettFire says(16:32:22):
But you're right. He is a male relation of Sanura's.....
Puzzler says(16:32:29):
Yaaa they'll have fun with that XD
ScarlettFire says(16:32:30):
No, Isolde, Em
Puzzler says(16:32:35):
Oooh
CelticaNoir says(16:32:37):
:D
Puzzler says(16:32:40):
I thought you meant all of them
ScarlettFire says(16:32:42):
refuses to say WHICh though
CelticaNoir says(16:32:48):
D'aw.
CelticaNoir says(16:32:49):
:D
CelticaNoir says(16:33:09):
Isolde might realise it's time for her breakfast.
CelticaNoir says(16:33:13):
She kind of sneaked out. :D
ScarlettFire says(16:33:15):
I'm leannig more towards Brother/Father/Uncle possibly Cousin or the like.
ScarlettFire says(16:33:21):
lol Triplet
Puzzler says(16:33:23):
If they all went they would have to carry a thrashing Shawnee with them >>
CelticaNoir says(16:33:32):
Against her father's wishes.
ScarlettFire says(16:33:33):
No, Em. Just Islode
CelticaNoir says(16:33:44):
He'd planted guards in front of her door. :D
ScarlettFire says(16:33:43):
pauses
Puzzler says(16:33:45):
My cat is having a hay day with catnip
Puzzler says(16:33:49):
I'm kinda scarrred
ScarlettFire says(16:33:49):
Thoguh that would be interesting
CelticaNoir says(16:34:01):
It would but.
CelticaNoir says(16:34:05):
Not yet.
CelticaNoir says(16:34:07):
Just, not yet.
idraax says(16:34:12):
back
CelticaNoir says(16:34:18):
Because there's Ravel too...
Puzzler says(16:34:19):
watches her cat go nits
ScarlettFire says(16:34:21):
Ravel would be able to seek sanctuary, you know, if he explained that his father is trying to kill him
Puzzler says(16:34:21):
nuts*
idraax says(16:34:22):
I'll eat lunch after the handyman leaves
CelticaNoir says(16:34:28):
He would...
ScarlettFire says(16:34:33):
Altair DID see the result of THAT
CelticaNoir says(16:34:34):
But would Ziran trust him?
ScarlettFire says(16:34:55):
Ah, Altair would confirm Ravel's claims and Ziran trusts his general.
CelticaNoir says(16:34:59):
Ziran did, after all, throw an ally healer in the dungeon.
CelticaNoir says(16:35:04):
Hrm.
CelticaNoir says(16:35:07):
Okays...
CelticaNoir says(16:35:08):
:D
ScarlettFire says(16:35:14):
If his General backed up the kid's claims, Ziran would more than likely grant him sanctuary
CelticaNoir says(16:35:21):
And Isolde would back up both of them.
ScarlettFire says(16:35:38):
Ziran wasn't told who she was, Triplet
CelticaNoir says(16:35:46):
You might've noticed, but Isolde's being a little too clingy in her own way.
CelticaNoir says(16:35:55):
Ohhhh. Right. :D
ScarlettFire says(16:36:01):
He assumed she was an enemy healer...not a possible allie
idraax says(16:36:12):
I need a strong swear word
CelticaNoir says(16:36:13):
*nod*
ScarlettFire says(16:36:14):
Since /all/ healers wear blue.
CelticaNoir says(16:36:19):
Yeah.
ScarlettFire says(16:36:22):
Regardless of alliance.
ScarlettFire says(16:36:25):
nods
CelticaNoir says(16:36:27):
A strong swear word? XD
idraax says(16:36:31):
Yes
CelticaNoir says(16:36:32):
What about the F word? XD
idraax says(16:36:35):
Don't tell me in chat
CelticaNoir says(16:36:38):
:P
idraax says(16:36:39):
Stronger
ScarlettFire says(16:36:39):
.......No
ScarlettFire says(16:36:43):
Ah. Hm.
ScarlettFire says(16:36:55):
Draax? Link me?
CelticaNoir says(16:36:56):
Okay.
CelticaNoir says(16:37:06):
But we need Altair to move in on them first.
CelticaNoir says(16:37:15):
Ravel won't be coming of his own volition.
Varg says(16:37:17):
Chris Rock doesn't look 46 o_O
CelticaNoir says(16:37:23):
He's too stubborn for that.
Puzzler says(16:37:32):
Your face doesn't look 46
ScarlettFire says(16:37:32):
Agreed, Triplet, which can't be done until the scene with Sanura and the guard persona of Jarelle
CelticaNoir says(16:37:39):
Yeah.
ScarlettFire says(16:37:42):
nods
CelticaNoir says(16:37:58):
Isolde's being clingy...
CelticaNoir says(16:38:00):
Weird.
CelticaNoir says(16:38:01):
:D
ScarlettFire says(16:38:12):
Ugh. Where's Kels when I need her?
ScarlettFire says(16:38:16):
lol Tripelt
CelticaNoir says(16:38:25):
:D
wickedwonder says(16:38:41):
Oh
wickedwonder says(16:38:45):
Im here?
CelticaNoir says(16:38:51):
Ooh a fourth nomination.
CelticaNoir says(16:38:57):
From Tabby. :D
ScarlettFire says(16:38:57):
We need to bring all the Lyall characters together in the throne room or something
CelticaNoir says(16:39:03):
Yusss.
Puzzler says(16:39:05):
Me: Mommmyyyy make me grilled cheese please
Mom: No I'm hungover
ScarlettFire says(16:39:07):
ponders
ScarlettFire says(16:39:17):
makes moves for that to happen
CelticaNoir says(16:39:25):
D'aw, Ems. *huggles and makes her a grilled cheese*
idraax says(16:39:32):
:(
Puzzler says(16:39:34):
8D Ily
CelticaNoir says(16:39:36):
Triplet's sounding like a chessmaster. :D
idraax says(16:39:46):
wants grilled cheese now
CelticaNoir says(16:39:57):
hands Idraagon a grilled cheese too.
idraax says(16:40:16):
Thanks
Puzzler says(16:40:21):
I should go make myself some
ScarlettFire says(16:40:22):
I'm planning for Altair to get suspicious of why Elleraj (Jarelle's Guard persona) is in Sanura's room....get him to take both to the throne room... Get the rest, Isolde, Ravel, etc, there too and for someone to find Niton and bring him back to the palace.
ScarlettFire says(16:40:26):
Have I missed anyone?
idraax says(16:40:30):
eats the sandwhich
Puzzler says(16:40:31):
But I'm si lazzzzyyyy
ScarlettFire says(16:40:39):
Triplet, that's because I am. >.>
CelticaNoir says(16:40:44):
Hrm. :D
CelticaNoir says(16:40:55):
loves chess even though she can't play well.
CelticaNoir says(16:40:58):
Okay.
ScarlettFire says(16:41:02):
I like to plot out my moves sometimes. Especially in my novels.
Puzzler says(16:41:06):
That sounds like a plan, Scarry
CelticaNoir says(16:41:07):
The captains too?
ScarlettFire says(16:41:10):
Good
ScarlettFire says(16:41:13):
Yes, Triplet
CelticaNoir says(16:41:16):
We keep forgetting the captains.
ScarlettFire says(16:41:26):
In fact, I plan for the Captains to find Niton and bring him in
Puzzler says(16:41:30):
So just Isolde and Rav or the rest too?
CelticaNoir says(16:41:33):
Yuuuuus.
ScarlettFire says(16:41:38):
The rest as well.
CelticaNoir says(16:41:39):
The rest as well.
CelticaNoir says(16:41:43):
:D
Puzzler says(16:41:45):
Oh gees
ScarlettFire says(16:41:47):
Triplet. You're in my head again.
CelticaNoir says(16:41:51):
Haha.
Puzzler says(16:41:51):
Shawnee is not going to like this
CelticaNoir says(16:41:54):
Sowwy. :P
ScarlettFire says(16:41:54):
Shawnee is gonig ot balk, right?
ScarlettFire says(16:41:59):
lol Triplet
CelticaNoir says(16:42:02):
:D
Puzzler says(16:42:03):
...balk?
ScarlettFire says(16:42:10):
Freak out, refuse to go with
Puzzler says(16:42:13):
Ah
Puzzler says(16:42:15):
Yes
CelticaNoir says(16:42:23):
I think Shawnee's going to kick and scream all the way there and call Seghed names.
CelticaNoir says(16:42:29):
...If I'm right, that is. XD
idraax says(16:42:31):
wants someone to post in How to escape with a fleeing llama
Puzzler says(16:42:34):
Yusssss XD
ScarlettFire says(16:42:35):
And this is only all if it goes according to plan and nothing too crazy happens to derail it
CelticaNoir says(16:42:44):
Yus.
Puzzler says(16:44:44):
giggles thinking of how much Shawnee will freak out
ScarlettFire says(16:45:07):
lol
CelticaNoir says(16:45:30):
:D
CelticaNoir says(16:45:40):
But Altair has to report them first.
CelticaNoir says(16:45:50):
Isolde will probably hate him after that...
CelticaNoir says(16:46:00):
But he has to do it.
CelticaNoir says(16:46:13):
Ravel won't come without a fight, that's for sure.
idraax says(16:46:48):
hopes that this word works
CelticaNoir says(16:46:51):
:D


Thanks for reading. Don't forget to post!

~Scar.
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:26 pm
Kelcia says...



I'm so sorry for not posing for the longest time. I've been, quite literally, swamped. I'll try and post this evening. Sorry. xP
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