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I am not entirely sure where to go after this. Maybe a little hiest with the newcomers, perhaps?

I just remembered that Ace's parents would be really easy targets, if you wanna go that way. Or you can tell him to shut up and deal with it, since he's used to that too.

And yes, there should be a heist with the newbies. Fun fun!

Ben, I love the touch about the grenades, that is very Sal (and Alis).

Lol, thanks I just wanted to get a bit'a authorative Reg in there .

I think we are about ready to lead up to 'the final battle. I still want to either keep it going after that or start a fourth....

I think we should keep this one going and think about a fourth in the future.

You're probably right....

All the relationships are getting messed up, I noticed.

Bree is dead, so Reg doesn't have her anymore
Maitea killed Bree, and Ace doesn't want anything to do with her for now.
Alis liked Jimmy, but then Cleo kissed him, and Alis got mad.
James might have to leave because Reg wants him dead, which upsets Riley.

Really, the only people that have stayed the same are Chris, Sal, and Eve. Everything else is all messed up. And, with Riley, it was her sister who died.

Well, when Reg finds out he's going to lose his mind because he protects three things: His sister, Bree and Riley.

One's got caught out, so he's gon'a go mad.

Poor Reg...

Everyone's been at each other's necks since Bree died....

That's good. It's creating tension and drama, becoming a plot that arises from itself rather than us needing to force it somewhere. The hostility Reg keeps having towards Sal and Ace is giving the story somewhere to go

Hey there everybody! I'm loving the SB as usual, and I sometimes miss being in it (considering I'm the creator of the PK). So, I might be rejoining with a new character. Not now, mainly because of the hecticity, but I'm going to wait for a moment I think is right, considering this character already has his own short story and entrance to join the gang. I'll keep reading, and when the moment is right, I'm jumping on in with my new character, Howard Hodgins.

I love doing these little spinoff stories, and the RHG series isn't of my own, so I should share with you guys what it is I'm doing with the creation I've loved being a part of, and plan to continue with, even if it's in my own solo tales. I'm rambling a bit. I'll throw my hat in when the time looks right, or when you guys think the time looks right (perhaps pretty soon, considering you guys are looking for a job and my story ends with one to get me friendly with you all), and I hope you enjoy the short story as much as I enjoyed writing it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65592.html

Have a lucky day!

I thought it was pretty good. I'm glad you brought Howard in....

Yay, I'm finally back from vacation!